Reviews for Bubblegum
Anisthasia Zewi Cortexz chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
OMFG that was so freaking cute!
Naru-Naru chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Okay, it being entirely in bold sucks and you definitely have some grammar issues, but I like the plot :) It's cute
ecologicalPanda chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
cute! ;) although i would recomend not typing the whole story in CAPS LOCK and un-bolding everythihng. other than that, great
Lanny L chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
heh- that seems like something kiri would do!
Little-Wolf94 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
All I can say is cute!
ThatGirl96 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
It's not good to lie Naru-Naru
lulu halulu chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
LOL! That was so OOC but awesome anyway!
athanasiamikee chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
LOL!

What the heck!

Hahah that was kinda un expected
Anon chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Cute. But you shouldn't capitalize and bold everything. It is harder to read that way.
minimi 1 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
totaly asome
cookiesluv chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
very random indeed xD

It doesn't really match Kiri's personality

But I like it ;D all the dramatic tension with a "lil naughty but cute" sense to it.

My advice is you shouldn't use Caplocks for the text, cuz it makes the readers feel like the characters are shouting.

Overall, it's very captivating and 'hot' oneshot ;D

good job
Honeymusterd chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
tonge action i see!
someonecool93 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Could you please, NOT use the bold and capslock when writing stories? It literally gives bad impression. And, btw, Kiri's too straight-forward.
xCrystalized chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
omg was that Narumi's gum? she stole his gum! ek! so cute! xD
Azrael Starwind chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
hilarious and that is exactly how i would have envisioned it

kudos to you
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