|Reviews for Witch's Revenge|
| Esther261 chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
I like your story but before I compliment you. HOW COULD YOU MAKE SIMON GET HURT LIKE THAT AND NOT RETURN WITH DAVE. I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!*huge crowd pulles me back*. But Im not I liked your story but not what you did to Simon. Poor Simon it will be over soon
| KelseyMarieFeldhan chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
Ima kill that bitch .
| goodperson chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
HAHAHAHA ! chipmunks can't eat meat, or at least I don't think they can .
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2014
I thot brend poiend him
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
I COUD NOT STOP LAUPHING I MEEN THIS IS SO FUNNY I WONDER WHY I DIDNT HAVE A HAERT ATTACK.
| meme chapter 10 . 1/17/2014
I love the gas chapter ! and this song
| charlie chapter 12 . 12/23/2013
afterwards does alvin's gas get even worse
| CuddlyHawk chapter 12 . 12/24/2011
I would have reviewed sooner, but I was so caught up in soaking in all the details of your stories. You are a professional writer, I can tell. Either that, or you have been given a LOT of good pointers to writing effectively and near flawlessly. It's writers like you I work so hard to try to be like. All your stories are so beautifully written, formatted correctly, uses the right tense and terms, etc. It was really a treat to find you, Rachel Erica, and someday, I hope to write like you :)
Now I must go review the other stories of yours I read
| EpicSmiley12 chapter 12 . 9/17/2011
Oh, Alvin and his dirty humor XD
Once again, you are awesome!
| Spiritofdawolf chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I have to say this story is perfect! It has such a great blend of humor and drama. I felt so bad for Simon (and he's my least favorite). Felt so bad I wanted to write a "What if" version of the story regarding Simon's situation. What if someone tried to protect him from Brenda's twin and they both ended up hurt badly? I wanted to ask permission before writing it. Feel free to say no if you want. I'll understand and respect that. But please PM me and let me know what you think.
| Kaylee chapter 12 . 12/29/2009
great.i loved when alvin said he had to go to the should have made alvin actually go to the bathroom and have to were diapers and kids at school laugh and the person who laughs the most is...BRITNEY..LOVE KAYLEE
| Kaylee chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
awsome...miost storys i want to change but not this and from the one and only ...KAYLEE.
| skully chapter 7 . 8/25/2009
ok, i just wanted to say, as much as it kills me, that i laughe at the part with the four kid were throwing up all over each other...it so gross,sad, but...funny
| skully chapter 4 . 8/24/2009
OMG! i am reading this right now, its like 2:30 in t he morning, and my familiy is sleepin and i just read chapter four. OMG! i couldn't stop luaghing!
| skully chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
this is a pretty intense story so far -_-'
and funny author note at the end of chapter 3
"and brenda ment she wanted to get it on!"...lol!
your an awesome writter :3