|Reviews for Leaving Hinata|
| Alex0597 chapter 4 . 3/1
Ah, why haven't you updated this! It's probably one of my favorite Keitaro-leaves-the-Hinata fics out there; Keitaro's not glaringly OOC, and the girls aren't complete bitches, just misguided ones.
| Ibskib chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
I guess it's a fitting place to meet Kitsune, for who else could it be? A shame the story was discontinued.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
It seems that you decided to discontinue this fic. That's a shame because it a really good story.
I agree with Officer hot pants, this most realistic out of all the 'Keitaro had enough' stories.
Though you said he is OOC, the only different is that Keitaro is still Keitaro except he's evolving into a regular guy instead of a sap who sees everything in rosey colored glasses. Most fics have him do a instant 180 or turn into a total jerk. But you manage to keep him somewhat in character.
The hinata girls on their own discovering what a b#tch they been to him without everyone ripping into them.
Though it would be interesting to see what will happen when they finally meet Sayuri.
Will Su or Motoko's sister show up to find out what they did to Keitaro?
If you did decide to give up on this fic, please tell us four years of nothing is kind of unfair.
| Savage Rain chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
Amazing story, annoyed as hell its pracitcally abondoned. Hmm my money of who it is is Kitsune. No one else of the top of my head, except maybe his aunt, would be at a night club.
| Sperance chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
Damn, too bad this seems to be abandoned. I think you're the one that's making this idea work the best
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
Oh, you evil BASTARD! You *would* stop there! Granted, I've narrowed the possible encounter down to a single-entry list (assuming it isn't Tsuruko; *she* can show up anywhere, logic be damned), but still...
Of all the combined "Keitaro's revenge", "Keitaro grows a spine", and "Keitaro gets a hand up" stories, this is just about the only *realistic* one, and the list of *entertaining* ones (which it tops) isn't much longer. Excellent work in every gradable way. Too bad it's apparently dead.
| MasterBrattan chapter 4 . 6/5/2012
hey Tezza, you may want to consider moving your lemon fics to either adultfanfiction . net, or mediaminer . org, b/c the people in charge of this site are probably getting ready to get rid the fics with lemons in them at some point soon
| Kenjo chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Ack! Who was it? Hopefully not Naru...
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
wow! I really like what u were doin with this story, Tezz! Please pick it back up! I hope u get this! I wanna know who Keitaro ran into! PLEASE?
| insomniac1970 chapter 4 . 2/19/2012
I really hope that you could finish this story someday. I really like it and the 3 year long cliffy is a bit mean. This is just a note to encourage you. Cheers!
| ChaosRune chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
I don't care how many years it has been since your last update, you can't leave such a great fanfic with this cliffhanger!
| migdude10 chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
Really enjoying this! Would love to see some more!
| Loatroll chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
Interesting stuff. Thanks for the read.
| Hexas 178 chapter 4 . 8/15/2011
Hello thank you for writing a story like this love these types where Keitaro decides to show some back bone and give those "Laides" cough cough what they deserve
Please continue this story soon I really enjoy it but I have only one request could you expand a bit on shirai and his girlfriends realtionship like maybe a flashback showing how they got together
| GreyWarden2009 chapter 4 . 5/9/2011
Argh! The suspense is killin me, and I see you haven't touched this story in 2 years. Damn it all. Great story, Tezza.