Reviews for you hold my heart
Victoria Pendragon chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
*Aruruu's voice* "Ane-san married Daddy, and now Ane-san's gonna have Daddys baby!"

Ahhh, the innocence of youth. Isn't it weird how kids can say things like that, and it's classified as "cute", not "creepy"?
sirmoocowthethird chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
the story was so good i didn't even notice the bad punctuation untill you pointed it out.
XxMisaki EndouxX chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Wow... simply wow... I just finished playing the game and I'm still hooked... wow
megumisakura chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
sasukegirl4 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Beautiful. When Hakuro left I cried for days
Silent Sinner Abella chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Hado, the story was fine save for some of the spelling. I love Hakuro and Eruru together!