|Reviews for Unwelcome Advances|
| Literati Lover chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Great job! ) I was definitely laughing. :)
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I loved this story. I always wondered why Jessica felt so strongly about Edward.
| FreakyLittlePixie chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Hehe, poor Edward. (I hold no sympathy for Jessica...:P) I loved this. I always love a funny Jasper POV! :)
| scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Okay, this was awesome. xD I loved Jasper messing with Jessica's emotions, and the awkwardness of it all, and it was just cute. And funny. Yeah. Nice job. xD
| Delilah Lovett chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Omg. Jasper is made of win lol. I love that he totally messed with Jessica just to screw with Edward lol. Edward's uncomfortableness was screaming from the story at me lol. Love that she got all flustered afterward and that the others had already made a run for it. Wonderfully done. Gotta love some Cullen family fun times :P
| The Twilight Awards chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Congratulations! This story has been nominated in Round 3 of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:
Category 1 Pre-Twilight
Category 2 Best One-Shot Short
Category 3 Best Comedy
| Eebee chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
That was great and hilarious! Well done.
| Kafei1 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Haha, awesome story!
| Simply-Sardonic chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Ah that was hilarious. I'll bet Jessica was mortified. Haha, go Jasper!
| Aeromance chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
So...I went to your page to read a little story I had heard about called "News To Me" and to my extreme dissapointment it wasn't there. Do not get me wrong, I am dissapointed in the fact that I wasn't quick enough to read it but I am extremely happy and excited for you. I've been telling a lot of 'All Human' twilight fan fiction writers that they could just take the story, change the names and have a truly great novel on their hands. Looks like you wisened up and actually did that. Please update me with how that is coming along, as I would love to hear.
Now, to the story I am reviewing. This is a rather hilarious one shot that was truly great. Everyone seems really in character and it all went together and worked, something I can't say for most Twilight fan fiction I've been reading lately.
I wish you luck in all future endeavours.
Much fanfic love,
| tomboy14 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Jasper must have been hanging out more with Emmett to torture poor Edward to that degree. Although torturing Edward is quite an addicting thing.
Now we know why Jessica is so flustered by Edward and resents Bella so much.
| Justine Lark chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
That was funny. Poor Edward, trying to escape while maintaining his cool and controlling his fury!
| neologismitastical chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Poor Jessica! Poor Edward... That was funny!
| effulgent.fred chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
THAT WAS HILARIOUS! I always found Jessica's infatuation with Edward amusing. Thanks for writing such a wonderful fanfic about it!
P.S. I don't usually sound so smart...I'm in a weird mood today...lol
| Sorceress Jade chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
They're wicked, all of them. But I imagine Edward deserves it. It must be insufferable having him for a brother.