Reviews for Unwelcome Advances
barefootduchess chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I love it! Hilarious! I love when Jasper starts screwing with peoples emotions!
Julsgracie chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
HAHA loved it!
Tears of Constantine chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
The cullen kids can be so mean to Edward sometimes! They are what in there late 70's, 50's 100's and they still act like high schoolers.

I love your stories becasue they show us the amusing side of the Cullen's thats slightly perverted and we all knew was there just never saw! Keep up the good work!

Truly yours,

Tears of Constantine
Risitakez chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
U must be bored of my comments by now.. I'm sorry :/

This was beyond entertaining.. I laughed so hard i spilled the cup of water i had in my hand. (

But Edward is always so calm & collected to have Jasper play games on him is hilarious.. I can picture Emmett but not Jasper but thank u again for making me laugh.
kathrynwitte chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Ha ha ha ha ha ha (she reviewed in a singsong voice) I'd have liked to kick it up another notch, as Jasper wanted to, simply to freak Edward out a little more. What would Edward have done if she had put her hand on his crotch and massaged, ever so gently? ** laughs evilly**

Please excuse me, I seem to have forgotten my middle aged self for a minute. I'm laughing and enjoying this too much...
Inactivityispermanent chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
lol omg lol that was so funny jasper was great! poor edward tho
Lizzaphor chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
too bad jasper saved the three of them. that was funny!
LolaluvsEdward chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
lol that was funny! :P
Crazy Twilight Lover chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Ha ha...funny...can't breathe...lol...good! I like it! Poor Jessica though...and did Edward get back at Jasper?
xXx Amy Scott Luvs DA's xXx chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
... ... THAT WAS AWESOME! I love Jasper! He is such a troublemaker!

Amelia Cullen
Gwarpy chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
this story was so funny! Good job! :D
LovesTheHeat chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
lol. that was brilliant!

i loved it. (:
ablablahh chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Haha I love Jasper. This is hilarious!
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Hahah that was great! Oh I love Jasper and Alice! Such a great little tag team, lol. God Jessica was so funny! I was laughing with Jasper every time Edward got pissed! Great story ;-D
TeamVampire chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Ahahahah! I love Jasper. Having control over emotions would be so tempting... you'd just have to use them for evil sometimes.
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