Reviews for Unwelcome Advances
sophia666 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Alice taking Rosalie and Emmett out was pretty funny. And Jess's sudden 'forwardness'. Loved the Cullens, great writing.
Mrs.EdwardCullen95 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
LOL!
SleathyNinja chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
hehe funny!
Running-w-vampires chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Uh-oh! Run, Jasper, run! lol I love what you did to Jessica. She deserved it!
kohana.of.the.roses chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
This story is so funny! I love it. I love how Jasper played with Jessica's feelings like that. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories. :D
thanksforthelaughs chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Hey Heartbroken1 :)

Great One-shot!

It was awesome! XD

Keep writing!

You rock,

thanksforthelaughs :)
iceonfire3105 chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
lmao... great story!
secilmis yazar chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
very nice! i laughed all the way! poor jessica, though :)
Edward-is-hunky chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
bahaha

brilliant!
MoonlightShadowOfADarkDream chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Hahahahahaha! That one was just totally hilarous!
kodakuramac chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
HA HA HA!
Mizra chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Oh, Jessica, Jessica, Jessica. When will you realize that he's just not that into you? ;)

Funny bit with Jasper egging her on, too. Classic brothery rivalry.
mom22boys chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Awesome! I think that I am beginning to like Jasper a lot more. I found you on from someones recomendation and I am really happy with your writing style!
sHaRmAiNe chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
haha.!. that was funny.!.
Forks1 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
too funny... pre-Bella right?
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