Reviews for Firsts
Mandi1 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
"My Only..." oh, it's so sweet I had to clutch at my heart!

First, I just love this. I love how we finally get to see a little (too little!) glimpse of how Carlisle must have felt. Too often it's just Esme. You've done so well here with him!

Second, this: "They were the hands of an artist, a true artist whose medium was flesh and bone instead of some paltry substitute like oils or clay." As a student and a lit-buff and an English teacher, I could go on and on about the many layers of that tiny sentence. Artist, preacher, doctor, vampire, life-giver...geez. Good show, you.

Thank you for writing this.
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
aw that was sweet I loved it a lot oh I love Carlisle! lol ;)
TrueLovesKiss chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Wow that was really good
MartaSwan chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
so lovely
Ellie too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Hello! I just love all of your writing; so few people manage to capture the eloquence of our favorite vampires (particularly Carlisle and Esme). You did WONDERFULLY. No big surprise, really, considering it came from you, but it's rather nice to find such a beautiful, moving FF among the hoards of "Bella's Pregnant?" Lol, great job. Hope to read more from you soon.

The elegant Ellie
xxtwilight chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Love, love, love it! You absolutely captured the love between Carlisle and Esme... a few more chapters and it'd be as dreamy as Edward and Bella.

I would LOVE to read more CarlislexEsme stories by you. I sincerely hope you write more oneshots or stories of them. I'll be checking! xD
Ranma15177 chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I absolutely loved it! You captured the essence of their relationship very well, and the tenor of Esme's character. I really enjoyed reading this. Sorry I didn't get the opportunity to do so earlier!

Porcupined chapter 1 . 2/16/2008

Good job doing it from Esme's point of veiw, I felt like your captured her spirit perfectly. It was interesting to hear from her past, especially since I'd never really though about the father of her child.

Flippin' sweet, man.

Favorited. Because I'm in love with it.
BiteMeSilly chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
aw! this had me smiling the whole time. i love it.
Endlessly Drowning chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
This was so amazingly good. I loved it. It was just perfect in every way. You captured the emotion so, so well. I actually cried a little. And now...I think I'll go read it again.

Perfect. Great story.
yayme2012 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Aw... sweet... I usually don't read Esme and Carlisle fics... but this was amazing!

Even the lemon wasn't porny, it was sweet. It told the complete story of the couple in a new way.
DiamondSkin chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Amazing! You are getting better and better with these lemons, my dear! This one was quite perfect, really. If you plan on doing anymore of these oneshots, do your next one with Jasper and Alice... I would love to hear how their first time was ;)

wifeyandgirls chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Amazing... This just goes to show everyone that lemons do not need to be explicit in order to get to point across. I loved it! Oh, I do hope you'll do more!
AndThereWasLight chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
WOW! You are a talented author. I just got an account so I could finally review (I've been reading on this site for months now). Your stories are so powerful and real. This story is so sweet and you make the interaction between Esme & Carlisle so real & tangible. Great job, once again!
Sh.C chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Incredible. My eyes got all misty, that was really awesome. Incredible.
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