Reviews for Firsts
Lesliemac531 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Very sweet story. Excellent writing, just like everything else you have written! Thank you for sharing it.
maremo16 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
that was brillant

it's so sweet how you put edward and bella in the story

this was a great story

it was nice on how we got to see carlisle and esme' story

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myxbeautifulxidiot chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
i love this! it was so sweet and perfectly carlisle and esme! it totally rocked!
koerle chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Now that is one sweet Valentines gift! Very nice story! Your writing is simply beautiful!
MyLion.MyLamb chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Aw! i love esme's pov...so rarely do we hear from her or about her begining...the begining had me sad but then it it got gradually happier...it was a perfect representation of what i think most imagine about them...wonderful...super sweet
SomethingCuteandCreative chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
aww! i love carlisexesme ones! This is really cute and really good! loved it!
Lovebugs chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was wonderful. The love they share WOW! Words can not explain
HeswamtoFrance chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Wow! So much emotion, love, and desire! You have a way with words, I can feel Esme's love rolling off of the page! It is amazing!

George
hermionejeangrangerweasley chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
that is so sweet
muggleinlove chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Loved the story...

Very romantic and perfect for Valentine's Day!

Katie :)
zrbs chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
wow! You do lemon so pretty!

Beautiful and HOT!
WhoDatWTF chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! Its actually the first Valentine's Day related thing that hasn't made me depressed today! I hate Valentine's Day...miserable. Oh, and I completely agree about Nyquil flavors. The green is disgusting, but the red is actually drinkable! haha!
eclipselover chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Aw... they are so cute together
KlutzLike Bella chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Wow... Very, very good.
SuNgLaSsEs-ChI'c chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Very sweet
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