|Reviews for Firsts|
| bloody ampersand chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was so fluffy! (Good, honest fluff though. Not silly cotton candy fluff, more like good chocolate.) I think Esme and Carlisle tie with Alice and Jazz for my fav couple! They're just so sweet.
| EclipseoftheTwilightMoon chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
You have done it again. This is a piece of true quality writing. I really wish I could write as well. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
| sarah chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Happy Valentines Day!
Thanks for the story. Great as always!
| Bellashouldvebeen chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
aw that was beautiful. you are such an amazing writer. keep writing i love reading them.
| Bella's humanity chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
I don't know how you do it. Once again, you've rendered me speechless with a breath-taking story. I can feel the emotion radiating from every word. I love the way you have captured Esme and Carlisle's relationship, since we see so little of it in the books. You truly have a gift!
I don't want to seem like I'm peddling or anything, but if you happen to get a second, I wish you would read the one story I wrote, Finding Your Eternal Soulmate, just to see what you think of it. Part of it is about Esme and Carlisle. You're opinion would be greatly appreciated!
Keep on writing!
| MISSTTAYLORR chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
it still amazes me how you can seem to put so much love between two people in just simple words. beautiful as always.
you should consider writing a book. i believe you would be very good at it. but then again, with two boys would you have time?
| sam chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was beautifully written. You have such a great talent!
| she is brighter chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
happy valentines tag
| btgrs chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was amazing.
I loved how you wrote that.
It was so sweet, and moving. Esme and Carlisle are wonderful. Its so fair for them to have each other.
I just loved their first kiss. You were also great at writing their first time. So much love and passion. I love their tenderness.
Bella and Edward remind her of her own beginning? Thats great.
| ChocoMuffs chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
This was such a romantic, heart breaking, amazing chapter!
I loved it completely.
ever lasting love!
| Gao Jing Ning chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
very very good. you are a great writer. i felt engrossed in the story and was not interupted by writing flaws at all!
| m r s . a u t h o r chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
| drea chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
| lizabel411 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
When I opened my email and saw a new story alert I immediately went to fanfiction. I was right to rush. This is the most touching story I've ever read. It's sweet and let's me understand Carlisle and Esme a little better. It's great that this was created on Valentine's day! So cute! You already know how gifted u r! Keep it up!
| jaquisgirls chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was so sweet. You are such a talented writer. Good job!