Reviews for Without your love
kerritastic chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
awso dasloved it
iLoveYhuu14 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
omg seriously i was crying..i am not lying..that was so sad..are u gonna continue or was it a ones ot but that was so sweet
schoolgirl101 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
"Without your love, I would die."

this is the plot i am looking for!

i love the last line.

it's perfect.

so wonderful.

u should seriously think of changing the title to

Without Your Love

i enjoyed the story. it was short. and sweet.

Always, schoolgirl 101
kkairi325 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
OMG!That was really sad!I totally didn't expect the job!
VintagexXxlove chapter 1 . 2/14/2008

First off, good story!

Just a couple things, I think you might have wanted to carry out the ending a little bit? I dunno, just went by quickly, one moment I was reading that Gabi didn't love Troy (sad by the way, and actually unexpected... I thought she was going to say she was dying or something, lol) And then, all of a sudden, Troy's dead! (Also very sad!)

Of course, the story I flows together well, just the ending kind of had me like, what? Just jumped from one place to the other.

And it kinda' makes me wonder why Troy had that random note in his pocket? Did he know she was breaking up? Or was it just like a note saying how much he loved her?

And ouch, Gabi must feel HORRIBLE.

Overall, I really liked the story!

It was an interesting read, and the ending was totally unexpected!

Good Job! ]

xx Kylee