| Reviews for The New Girl, Will She Be My Savour? |
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  StillreadingLile chapter 3 . 11/15 You were moving things along pretty quickly but the story still had a chance to be good. Unfortunately you quit |
 croaker001 chapter 3 . 8/2/2008 Nice update. Keep going. |
| thousand lies chapter 2 . 4/2/2008 wow cool story! Please update, PLEASE... Don't keep me waitig for too long! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update ASAP! |
| lil-ying-fa chapter 2 . 3/7/2008 good story hope u update soon |
| HCC123 chapter 2 . 2/25/2008 aw that was so cute! pleasew update soon! |
| Truscott chapter 2 . 2/25/2008 Loved it. :) |
| IkarusCazadores chapter 1 . 2/21/2008 continue son please! |
| Truscott chapter 1 . 2/14/2008 Cool start :). I'm looking forward to reading more. |
| HCC123 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008 nice start! a little short but still good! please keep going! |
| xburningbrightx chapter 1 . 2/14/2008 Aw I really liked this. Can't wait to see where you take it. |
| vAMPLIFIED chapter 1 . 2/14/2008 I think it's an okay start, but Im going to be honest and help out, ) If you're going to be serious about writing fanfics, you should, for one, edit your chapters, and even making them longer would be nice. Don't be afraid to put some detail in there, either! :-) For instance, more dialogue! I'm extremely sorry if this sounds like a flame, I don't want it to because I hate flamers myself, I'm just trying to help, but so far it's an okay start! ~Katy |