Reviews for The New Girl, Will She Be My Savour?
StillreadingLile chapter 3 . 11/15
You were moving things along pretty quickly but the story still had a chance to be good. Unfortunately you quit
croaker001 chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
Nice update. Keep going.
thousand lies chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
wow cool story!

Please update, PLEASE...

Don't keep me waitig for too long!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update ASAP!
lil-ying-fa chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
good story

hope u update soon
HCC123 chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
aw that was so cute! pleasew update soon!
Truscott chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Loved it. :)
IkarusCazadores chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
continue son please!
Truscott chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Cool start :). I'm looking forward to reading more.
HCC123 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
nice start! a little short but still good! please keep going!
xburningbrightx chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Aw I really liked this. Can't wait to see where you take it.
vAMPLIFIED chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
I think it's an okay start, but Im going to be honest and help out, ) If you're going to be serious about writing fanfics, you should, for one, edit your chapters, and even making them longer would be nice. Don't be afraid to put some detail in there, either! :-) For instance, more dialogue! I'm extremely sorry if this sounds like a flame, I don't want it to because I hate flamers myself, I'm just trying to help, but so far it's an okay start!

~Katy