Reviews for Trouble |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely writing. I enjoyed this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will you update this story soon I can't quit reading it please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im sorry but this behaviour is for more like four year olds...three even ...babies who are not even a full two years old DO NOT act like this...honestly...this story is a mess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cringy...i like fluff but this had cringy wattpad cliche all over it...the characters are way to OOC and there are plotholes and they are moving way to fast...geez...i feel it could turn out nice but the way youve written it seems so bloody...eh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good. I enjoyed it very much. I am just glad there was no angsty misunderstanding or anger. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You know that this story begs for a sequel that takes place when the Black twins start Hogwarts after being trained by the Weasley twins! Excellent! Proud of you. I wish I wrot elike this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story please update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I love your story very, very much. Please continue to write about one of my favorite couples, one of them being Sirius/Hermione. I think you're doing a wonderful job with this story. I am guessing, but I believe, that writing comes very easy for you. I also want to tell you that your story is very well written. You have an excellent command of the English language. I'm impressed. Please keep it up! Thank you for making a fellow reader like me happy. Keep up the great and wonderful work! Luiza |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story, just read all ten chapters and now I'm left wanting more. I think this is one of the better SB/HG stories that didn't involve time travel that I've seen on this site, please continue to update :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awe I love it more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story! |