Reviews for Trouble
gemini rose chapter 10 . 1/1/2011
update soon xx
Eljel chapter 10 . 12/31/2010
fantastic story! please keep going!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 10 . 12/23/2010
zeralena chapter 10 . 12/23/2010
Thank you for the update! Figures Colin would be working for the Prophet though, doesn't it? Him and his camera. But at least it wasn't Skeeter. That woman is completely vile, and should be eaten by a Venus Flytrap.
zeralena chapter 9 . 12/21/2010
I'm definitely interested in seeing where you plan on taking this story. Is it just going to be a cute family thing or is something dark and sinister going to pop up out of nowhere? Like I said, I'm curious. So you should probably update again.
Pineapple.X chapter 9 . 12/15/2010
I suck writing in English, but I felt I should write you something.

Your story is amazing, I found it watching a video on youtube and I think it's great. Update soon


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little-miss-beth chapter 9 . 9/15/2010
I love this story! Seriously (lol), it's one of my favourites ever.

Please keep writing!
Dorienn chapter 9 . 8/21/2010
Liked it!

Please, update soon!
jamieslady chapter 9 . 7/29/2010
please please update. I love this fic and only come onto this site for 2 stories, yours being one of them...
jamieslady chapter 9 . 7/15/2010
really loving this tale...clever premise

just one minor point, I'd have a beta take a second look, you keep putting threw instead of through...

but it is a very minor point
jamieslady chapter 9 . 7/14/2010
just found your wonderful story and have bookmarked it..and love it...

nicely paced and well thought out
johnnycakewasgolden chapter 9 . 5/1/2010
I'll be honest I never understood why people liked Harry and Ginny together!~ I mean Ginny was shy and barely talked to Harry from his 1-4th yr then all of a sudden in 5th book she comes out of her shell but when she does she is always snippy bitchy and snappy towards her brothers and Harry!~ Which is why I never liked her!~ And most people when they do fanfics with the major pair like FredMione GeorgeMione or SiriusMione or RemusMione and HPGW as a side pair she is usually so bossy and snarky and bitchy and ordering people around!~ So I always loathed Orange Crush ship!~ But the way you characterize Ginny makes me actually like her and HarryGinny(well not much but hey it is an improvement, so basically 50%) I mean she is not bossy, or snarky, or snippy. So I love HarryGinny in this fic which I may add is really a miracle!~ Just keep her non-stereotypical red headed lady lol

At the beginning with the Black twins I thought you were focusing on Xavier too much than you on Adian but nevermind cause you are doing it just right!~

I would love to see Fred, George, Remus, and Sirius to start on Xavier and Adian Marauder training!~ lol

Please change their names to Black soon!~

Update soon!~
sunshine21409 chapter 9 . 4/23/2010
NonianTwihard chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
I love it please finish it :)
Sampdoria chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
I am so trilled to see a new update to this story, thank you so much! I am very much looking forward to read more, so keep on writing:-))
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