Reviews for Begging For It
Alex Ranger chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
please write more to this story too cause its realy good!
wolfgirl7124 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
*sniff* poor sasuke-kun ;.;
natvarch chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
this was a really good/sad story. i havent read anything like it it before. it oveall was an intresting story with a pretty good ending if you ask me.
Bonfiore'sGirl chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Poor Sasuke... Really well written. Sometimes, Itachi should jump off a cliff...
Leah182 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
This is great you should update soon
Kaline Reine chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Wow I really liked the way you wrote this fic. It's very poetic in a strange way and I love the way you write! In short, this rocks! Keep it up.

MYsasuke-kun chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
aw man that was sad. i hope this isnt intended as a one shot, cause i wasnt to read more! i live it! poor sasuke-kun! i feel bad for him! meh sase-kun...
xdarkbeforedawn chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
omg, this was really good

love itt
rawrchelle chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Gosh. I don’t think I have anything to say about this. I think I’ve only read one ItaSasu, this being my second. And, to be quite honest, at first, I thought that the idea of incest to be quite… disturbing. But, you know, as you being to read this stuff—stuff such as this—you begin to realize the beauty in the relationship between the brothers. I guess, in your case, it can’t technically be classified as beauty, but I’m pretty sure you get what I mean xD.

I liked the way you told the reader how Itachi acts on different occasions. Sometimes, Sasuke gets it right, and sometimes, he gets it wrong. Although, I somehow feel that Itachi’s a little OOC in this; not sure why. Perhaps it’s because I can’t see him saying, “Jesus, Sasuke!”, and I can’t see him ‘hissing’, I guess. But it seems like if you take that away from this fic, then it just loses its sparkle.

The line, “He enjoys this. I don’t.” just somehow got to me. I mean, I’m pretty sure I write things similar to yours, placing particular small sentences into a paragraph of its own to create dramatic effect, or whatever, but, to actually have Sasuke say this was rather intimidating.

Some things I would’ve worded differently here and there, but that’s just probably because of the difference in our writing styles, so I hold nothing against you. It was well written, and the ending was simply perfect. Perhaps not the wording, but the whole idea where Itachi doesn’t let him die. Like, okay, he’s a bastard and all, and who knows what reason he needs Sasuke for—but he still needs him, nevertheless. I guess that’s the part I like most.

I apologize for writing a huge-ass review. I’ll stop my ranting now xD.

Continue writing!

EchoingxxxWhispers chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
this is a really good story, i love it.
darkmint1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Awesome i love it continue eventually please :D!