Reviews for Svelte
cherryflowerblossoms chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
-sigh- I love this. I loved the first part too.
DrAnime203 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
*fans self*

that was hot.
hi chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
hi this story was very well written and u definitely deserve more reviews. :)
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
really good one shot :D
ami chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
most kakasaku oneshots suck ass

but this one kicked ass xDD

it was realyy HOT xPP
Jini chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
.GOD.

That was so freaking hot it's not even funny. I LOVED this so much. And slightly possessive Kakashi was enjoyable too ;)

Great job!
Shadowed Replica chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This was a great story!

Loved it, keep writing more, Kakashi is so damn sexy!

haha ]
chewing.on.PEARLS chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
This was really good! I mean REALLY good! I really liked your 25KakaSaku Moments story, and I decided to read some more of your things! You are VERY talented, and this was awesome! I really thought the ending was sweet, and cute! GREAT JOB!

-SAYURI-
idk chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
that was a great story keep up the good work
Koo chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
One of the best KakaSaku ficlets I've read
blackbutterbly1997 chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
omg that was like so f*cking hot.
Rain.lover chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
I'm so content after reading this fic, it was so very amusing. I absolutely *loved* it!

'Gai-sensei in a green speedo, Gai-sensai in a green speedo'

That was one of many lines that made my hysteric giggles fill the room. I feel for my neighbours, I really do.

Right, I'm now off to read the rest of your fics, so good is this one.

Continue writing, won't you?

x
TheRYU chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
nice very nice
Kissing Killers chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
wow..i ddint read the others but now i think i will. i understood what was going on..-ish! i loved it. it is so detailed and it flows. it is Great!

-Poison
cmack chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Gai-sensei in a green speedo, Gai-sensai in a green speedo, Rock Lee in a green speedo. . .

Ha, one-liners like the one above made the story into something much more than an ordinary lemon. I love the mood you created here; part comical, part heavy.
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