|Reviews for The Charizard Chronicles|
| Yoshiguru chapter 3 . 2/22/2008
Man, I feel so sad for Charizard now... (sniffle)
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 3 . 2/22/2008
Aw! Poor Charizard...
RED! YOU DEMON!
Charizard was such a cute little charmander...oh look at that cute little baby...aw...he has such a cute face...
Yoshi: Tell me bed time story!
Charizard: Alright. Once upon a time there was a charizard.
Yoshi: YAY! That was awesome!
Charizard: I'm not done! Once upon a time there was a charizard that ate a yoshi. The end.
Charizard: No? Fine. Once upon a time there was a charizard that became best friends with a yoshi. The end.
*picks up a Dodongo* This looks kinda sketchy to me...*attempts to eat it*
*spits out Dodongo* Ew.
Charizard: Told ya.
Yoshi: *swallows Dodongo*
Bowser: SHUT UP ALREADY! *eats Red*
Update soonzers! ;)
| Chemeleon428 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Wow, Red sounds like a total jerk.. And he's turning into Ash, that evil person.
Anyhoo, I liked this chapter, keep up the good work!
~Sonic's number 1 fan has SPOKEN!
| ThunderRiver411 chapter 2 . 2/18/2008
Nice story. I'm working on one too. Check it out sometime.
| Yoshiguru chapter 2 . 2/18/2008
Excellent battle, my friend! :D
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
Awesome idea, especially putting the story in italics...
Red: HOLD ON! That was too short...we need to make this longer...
*the following is a paid advertisement for the Land of Randomness's cheeses and cakes company*
Red is such a random name for someone...*chuckles*...*ha ha ha*...*AHAHAHAHAHAHA!*
Red: Hey! Don't diss my name!
Charizard: Don't mind the randomness.
Pichu: Uh...what do I say?
Raichu: Nothing *eats Pichu*
Bronzong: Man, I don't want to fight another Charizard...for a while.
Bronzong: That can't be good...
*the preceding was a paid advertisement for the Land of Randomness's cheeses and cakes company*
CEO of Land of Randomness: HEY!
| Chemeleon428 chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
WOW! An interesting view-point of Charizard, and an overall great beginning! The only thing I can really suggest at this point, is make the chapters longer, that way, people won't read through too quickly and call it boring.
| Byoshi chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
It's a nice start for a SSB character who's typically overlooked. I didn't spot any glaring grammatical mistakes (save for one: full-ledge ought to be full(y) fledged) but having Charizard give an introduction/monologue about himself and what the story is going to be about isn't really catching or engrossing.
Also, the 'God bless them...' sounded rather out of context, but that could just be me. I have to say well done though for at least making a descriptive effort. A lot of SS stories I can't even get past the first chapter because they are either in script format, netspeak or have more spelling errors than actual words.
Overall, keep it up, and perhaps steer clear of the cliche openings to stories.
| Yoshiguru chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Man, this is really looking to be promising. I'll have my eye on this one. Keep up the good work! _