Reviews for Tumble
lost on baker street chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This was so sweet! I've always wondered what the story would have seemed like through Hermione's eyes. Keep writing things like this!
laura-csm chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
This is great! You went through the different stages, so nice.
sballLuvr5 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
aww this was a really cute story! i loved it, great job!

bitemedollface chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Straight-up fantastic.

I liked this story very much.

I am a picky reader and this was definitely deserves a four-star review.

Your imagery and the use of the short passages evoked a fitting mood; I also enjoyed the little hints of actual text. You captured Hermione's character very well.

At the risk of repeating myself-this was a FANTASTIC story.
babiiSCARS23 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
that was beautiful. i Loved it!
DaggerQuill chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
That was really amazing. I have goosebumps and am crying amazing, nice work!
vreales chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
that touched my heart! so amazing!
15stars chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
this was very good!

i liked how you did different steps in her life. i especially liked the one where it mentioned that they had become friends when she had almost died and it began again when he almost did.

the end was very nice as well.

great job!
Ella Bridi chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
I LOVE it!

You went through their entire relationship, showing how it changed and evolved.

It was really beautiful and touching!

Definietely on my fav's list!