|Reviews for A Very Elegant Conquest|
| XxXAlways-a-DreamerXxX chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
I love this! Please update! I really want to find out what happens between Maryanne and Jonathan, and going with Chamberlain's wife is brilliant! I love this and I really REALLY hope you continue it.
| FNK chapter 5 . 4/13/2009
I love your style of writing, you create the flow in your descriptions and you make the characters come alive with them. I am enjoying reading about this new character, Maryanne.
Poor Jonathan! It sounds like he’s going to be in trouble, big time. The man can’t help enjoy his poker-games! Despite all his indiscretions, he does have a kind heart, doesn’t he? I hope Maryanne will get to see that for herself and not be so naïve at Evy’s ramblings.
Please post another chapter!
| shadowxofxdarkness chapter 5 . 12/23/2008
Interesting idea for a story. I like it. I hope to read more soon. I truly do want to slug Chamberlain right now. That man is a sexist pig. gr
Anyways I enjoy your original character. I like how Johnathon treats her, such a gentleman to her. _
Please update soon.
Once again, lovely story so far
| dies chapter 3 . 11/13/2008
i think you should have the professor leave the girl, cos he seems the coward type anyway have him run away on the boat not caring about her and have the oconnell party help her it would add to the sexual tension i rekon and maybe have oconnall comment on it
| Lovisa Devereux chapter 5 . 11/13/2008
As usual, you capture Jonathans spark and personality perfectly. I like the way you haven't had him making advances (just yet anyway!)...spot on. I'm interested to see where you go with the next scenes- will Jon save Maryanne perhaps?
| Love Is A Fast Song chapter 5 . 10/25/2008
I definitely can't wait for your next chapter. The entire situation of Maryanne's husband being in Hammunaptra with them should be fairly interesting.
| vampiremistress2sexy chapter 5 . 10/18/2008
great chapter hope for more soon
| xdanishxpastryx chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
Great chapter, I know you don't like it but I thought it was really good! Keep it up!
| deeply-spaced chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
The poker scene was awesome ... I like your take on the details the movie didn't provide. Maryanne and Evy's talk was perfect. I am loving this story and cannot wait for the next chapter.
| Blue-Starlight92 chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
Once again, another good chapter, I love this!
I have no idea what you could do with the Mejai attack- except maybe have Maryanne not able to find Chamberlain and have to escape on her own.
| Werden chapter 2 . 9/28/2008
It's always nice to read a story with an interesting original character. She's not your typical drippy damsel in distress, which makes her absolutely fascinating.
And it also seems typical Jonathan to be interested in a woman who ends up being married. And not interested in history. Keep up the good work!
| deeply-spaced chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
Brilliant and lovely. I just love this story and it is evident you are enjoying writing this as much as I am enjoying reading it. Jonathan's feelings for Maryanne are touching and very sweet. I wish I knew what Maryanne wanted to say before Jon hurried down those steps to the lower deck! The suspense! I love it. Thank you. I am looking forward to your next chapter SO very much.
| vampiremistress2sexy chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
ooh i like it can't wait to see more
| Blue-Starlight92 chapter 4 . 9/27/2008
I like that this story really strays from the normal "oc character steals lines from other people" or "insert character into movie scenes" kind of fanfic. It's really good, Maryanne is so sweet!
| VulcanFanGirl chapter 3 . 9/16/2008
love the chapter can not wait till you start up on your next chapter whoot