|Reviews for And the Walls Came Tumbling Down|
| TrisakAminawn chapter 3 . 9/6/2013
Hmm. So, once the Wilsons fell apart, where did this version of Jericho end up? Foster care? Or just with his mom, before she died? Is she dead? Admittedly that would be ahead of schedule, but as I recall Joseph and Rose weren't raised together. I know the evil uncle made a very late debut...
The muteness goes back to a kidnapping motivated by Slade's mercenary activities; I was surprised that didn't come up. Especially since Adeline shot Slade's eye out for it and never entirely forgave him, and his mother's opinions would be relevant to Jericho's opinions, even if he was choosing to set them aside.
I'm especially amused by the direction you've taken this so far, since it was his role as season 1 Big Bad *on* Teen Titans that inspired the deterioration of comics Deathstroke from occasional anti-villain to utter psycho. He wound up the kind of dad who put Kryptonite in his daughter's skull. He didn't used to be like that.
I guess this raises the question of whether the oldest brother died following (badly) in his father's footsteps, since this Slade didn't take over a Ravager contract, and where Rose and Adeline are.
| TrisakAminawn chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Heh. Got out of being asked too much there, huh Joseph? Please do not get possessed by the entirety of Azerath and demand mercy killing this time, thank you. Surviving as a passenger in this Slade's head is probably harder, as his sanity has suffered, and insisting he stab you is not going to help.
To writer: you are vastly underestimating the complexity of sign, and the details of what Jericho has to say will inevitably be lost quite often, but at least he's not deaf, so the others don't have to try to SPEAK it. Even if they learn a lot of individual signs, the grammar is an absolute bitch. I do like the idea of all of them sitting down and *intensely* studying a series of instructional videos over the course of six weeks or so to get a solid base in the language so he'll be able to communicate, but it's obviously going to be an ongoing process. Getting some references to actual sign into the fic doesn't require actually knowing it, just, like, half an hour with Wikipedia and maybe Youtube.
This show's version of Roy is pretty funny. Garth once again raises the question of what the hell Atlantians even eat. Are MOLLUSCS acceptable, mon ami? And who the hell buys groceries at a mall?! There are malls with grocery stores? Holy shit.
| fluddershy chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
Please update because this is awesome and it is 2013!D please?! For me?!
| aurum88 chapter 10 . 3/13/2013
Really, really good. The man who saved them was Slade right? Interesting... Anywho, I really love it so far. Can't wait to hear about Bee. And after her it's Joey! (Oh my gosh I love him!) Please update soon.
| guardian921 chapter 5 . 3/1/2013
I've always been curious as to why fanfictions tend to have Jericho's eyes described as blue, brown, hazel, etc. when every DC version of him has GREEN eyes.
Just something I was hoping you could fill me in on.
Other then that, great story!
| gdfmfb chapter 11 . 2/8/2013
Are u going to continue? It's 2013 and i really want to know happens next!
| musicHuntress chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
I'm deeply sorry if I'm sounding impatient but it's already 2013 and I am interested in this particular fanfic. Can you please inform someone to continue it for you if you cannot? Thank you.
| Violentshadow chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
| mikaelsommervold chapter 11 . 10/10/2012
| Navaka114 chapter 10 . 7/2/2012
Sounds like it was Slade that rescued them...Wonder if Jericho realizes that? Poor Mas y Menos, having such a horrible early life...and they are still early in terms of kid years!
Can't wait to read Bumblebee and Jericho's life explanations! Especially Jericho's...wonder if he is going to tell them the truth since they are laying out every mistake and ashamed part of their past to him...
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/29/2012
will you plz continue this story? it's really intersting and your a really good writer and there aren't that many good fanfics with jericho in them and those are my favorite.
| iheartLink chapter 11 . 6/9/2012
Aw, man, I was looking forward to hearing more stories...especially Jericho's. But I understand. Life gets in the way sometimes :/ But I hope everything works out for you!
| iheartLink chapter 10 . 6/9/2012
Wow...out of all people Slade was the one who rescued them? But I guess if I think about it, it makes sense... What would the Titans even do if they figured out who it was?
But interesting take on their story! I loved it, and it's a kind of story that suits them well. Poor Mas and Menos, though :(
| iheartLink chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
I don't think there was too much wrong with the action scene. It wasn't perfect but it was a great start :)
| READINGhearts17 chapter 8 . 3/17/2012
Love this story so far!
But those aren't sideburns that's his hair framing his face.
Still love this story though!