|Reviews for The Librarian's Children|
| Gun toten Girly chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
Okay, WOW. I don't know how this review is going to turn out, so bear with me. I have a tendency for going way off track, but I want you to know right off the bat that this story... I can't even describe my gratitude for you writing this down and publishing it. "The Librarian's Children" is like the Odyssey - completely original and unable to be matched in plot and creativeness. Homer ain't got nothin' on you. Your ability to create a story and base it off of people that may or may not be even imagined in this kind of situation has created a kind of respect I never thought I could conjure. You have risen the level of the writing-standard and any story that can't match your level should be banned from the Teen Titans section - or ANY section, for that matter. Though that would mean everybody would be banned.
The ending, I'll admit, scared me. I was afraid that Gar had overthought things way too much, and I had a half-assed decision to beat him senseless with my keyboard when Rachel fixed things up. Then again, I wasn't expecting that. I like how you kept us on our toes, and I'm eagerly anticipating the Epilogue. I can wait until after Christmas though, and I trust you to have it before New Years. I love this story - I love it, I love it, I love it! I'm dearly hoping I'll be up in my bedroom when I read the Epilogue, so nobody would see me cry when I realize that it's over. Man, if I cried when I finished my first story, I can't imagine if one of my favorite stories ends. Sad to say, hasn't happened yet. I always have a disgusting trait of finding stories when they start out, so I'm watching them as they meander on. I am, however, glad I was able to follow "The Librarian's Children" from the... well, not beginning, but close enough. Fics are like your babies, and I can imagine the feeling of hitting that 'Complete' button something akin to saying 'I love you' and watching your oldest climb into his rented moving-van.
But it also gives you that feeling of 'OMGWTFBBQ!' when you're sitting there laughing like a maniac because you're DONE! It's a feeling you can't really describe... ::thinks:: I don't think I could describe it even if a list of all the emotions in the world were written on a piece of paper in front of me. I can tell you, however, the word 'sad' is going to circled eighty-times over by the time I finish that Epilogue. I'll be sure to tell you if somebody heard me crying.
I love the date. It was so cute, so adorably sweet and had me sighing on my couch by the time Gar plopped Rachel on the hammock. The moon was an excellent touch and would've been a bit too surreal if Gar had said "yes" when Rachel asked him about the stars. Brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! My favorite part of the whole story is Gar's plan about the future. You sure know how to capture the male mind. Melvin scared me for a second when I read the part about her climbing through the window. SO many scenarios ran through my mind it almost gave me a headache. I'm glad (somewhat) to know that she hadn't murdered anybody or whatnot. Though it still pissed me off to know she did that. She had every right to (really, I would have stripped the police officer of any manliness he had if he let those two boys walk) but I'm glad you added in her mistakes. Not every teenager is perfect, no matter how much parents wish. ::sighs::
I won't say goodbye because I'll be sure to leave one last review!
Have a safe and Merry Christmas!
| Mr Joey Bon chapter 6 . 12/22/2009
This. Is. Genious!
By far the best story i've ever read on this site. It combines so many elements that i disliked in other stories, and blends them together to make something extroardinary.
| titanfan45 chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
Simply fabulous. I'm really looking forward to the epilouge. I want to comment on the part where Melvin sneaks out to deal with the bullies wearing Rachael's old coat, that was worthy of a standing ovation.
| aznjtgirl chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
aw cuute :D i loved itt. youre a fantastic writer!
| Tazer42 chapter 24 . 12/22/2009
Awesome, I particularly enjoy this story, and an update was just what I needed right about now...
I know that I'm a chapter behind, but I just saw it today and I actually read your note at the end.
Wonderful development! I was wondering if Grayson was actually going to pop the question any time this story, and even more if they were going to leave. This was wonderful.
On the subject of Gar/Rae relations. . . Incredible. Really, I don't think that I have read a single book that has handled a relationship like this quite as well as you are here. And I read A LOT.
I won't be commenting on the other chapter tonight, but you can expect a review tomorrow.
P.S. If you have the time and/or inclination to reply, my email is thomas.
| angel the demonic angel chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
me again. awesome ending! please do an epilouge!
about that make into book thing.
i read this story from begining to end today and noticed it is way too long.
a trilogy could and more than probably would work.
thx for finishing this story.
i'll be sure to catch some more of your fics.
and if you do make this into a book, could ya give a shoutout to Emmanuel Kegler? much apreciated. cya!
| EternallyWilled chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
All I can say is "AMAZING!" A perfect ending to this story. I love how you followed up on everything and how their date was perfect. Its great how you transition everything so smoothly. I will have to read this chapter again and then the epilogue for sure .
Please don't ever stop writing as I look forward to future works from you! Your ever adoring fan,
| Jhinra chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
Woah, so soon. Awesome!
The we are the Champions bit was pretty funny. What really got me was the lacrosse stick/guitar. Because a friend of mine did the same with a broom.
The thought of Gar ruling the world is sort of scary. Probably he would go on worldwide tv every morning just to greet us. He'll probably make a law that you have to listen to it too.
I'm also glad (or is it not so glad?)to inform you that you have created a perfect jerk. Greg and Matthew sound like a promising young pair of pains in the neck.
Now the only thing that is yet to be answered of Rachel is how she took down people twice her size. Hmm, and the world will never know.
This chap. was so sweet it could give me cavities; the good kind though. If you can even get good cavities. But I digress. And don't worry this was plenty long, to sate your fans voratious reading appetites. Happy (insert whatever you celebrate here)!
| Moonlight123 chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
ok so Melvin attack Matthew and Greg? and she got caught by the police? and what was the deal with the cop? I was kinda confuse at that part.
I like how you did the date and them getting together.
| TheSilverWarrior chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
Omg, I'm so sorry that I didn't review for the previous chapter. Time didn't give me a chance. But I so cannot describe to you the wonderousness of your wonderfully wonderful fanfiction that leaves me in wonder. (lol) But seriously, these last few chapters are AMAZING. I'm not joking, not in the slightest. However, I have ONE complaint-your writing tears me in two: I have been so excited about the end of the story to see how things come out so I was lookin' forward to the end, but I also dread the end because it just means that there are no more chapter updates for the story and I'm left wanting more. Please say that you're gonna write even more fanfictions after this one, else (and this is the truth) there will be a serious lack of quality in this network. I could go on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on a-whops, lol. well, I could shower you with compliments about your writing and the plotline and everything and not even begin to cover how amazing this story is. I guess that the best way to describe would be to tell you that I honestly hope that MY writing is even half as good as yours-and I want to get published! So...yeah. Well done, Bravo, and Encore!
| Xipz chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
Fantastical. Absolutely marvelous.
It' been a long time since you started, so long, I think I'll read it again before I read the Epilouge.
A few thing I noticed, in two places there are typos.
Every infraction of the grounding would result in an additional week of grounding, and Melvin vowed suck would not be necessary.
There, I think it;s supposed to say such, not suck.
Because, both of them give you a look of…well, it’s like watching a cat get scratched behind the years in that perfect spot.
And there, where I believe it says years instead of ears.
Once again, fantsastic story, and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Will we be getting another BBxRAE soon?
| TheUtsukushiiYume chapter 25 . 12/22/2009
that was so sweet. a wonderful ending to a wonderful story.
| TheUtsukushiiYume chapter 24 . 12/22/2009
Im so happy you didnt die!
you have no idea how worried i was. I mean i thought you had totally forgotten about me-cough-i mean us. i must know what happens. I MUST!
| Stoic Moose Zombie chapter 24 . 12/22/2009
Again, over all satisfying. Not that I can critique you much along the lines of grammar and story telling since you are pretty damned good at it, and if there were any spelling errors I didn't see them probably because I was too busy enjoying the story. The only thing that worries me is that Ms. Roth may be going soft(Joking of course.) No the best part was something about Garfield worrying about losing his balls if Rachel got the wrong idea, I can't remember if you laid it out that plainly but the insinuation was there.
One other thing I wanted to point out in my first review is that your story has always lingered about whenever I looked through the selection of stories and it looked interesting but with being an alternate universe and that whole thing I was prepared to read the worst. However what a pleasant surprise it was to find I was wrong, in fact you may have the best story throughout the whole Beastboy/Raven archive. But that's just my very humble opinion.
| Somewhere In Time chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
Just to say, I did read this chapter when it was updated. Why I didn't review...I have no idea but it was probably that my computer blue-screened on me again and I didn't have the memory to get back to reviewing later.
I love that finally I get to know the full backstories of everyone, including the children, and more insights on why the children are living with Raven. :)