Reviews for Trust and Temptation
GalanthaDreams chapter 4 . 4/8
Wow. I don't think I've read a Penelo-Larsa story so absolutely compelling. You had my stomach in knots, my heart in conflict. I hope you come back to this one day, it is far too great to leave unfinished. To be so invested, so emotionally concerned so early is proof.
Ferrinas chapter 4 . 5/31/2014
re you going to update this story? i want to know what happens next so much xxxxx
Ferrinas chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
Im dyyyying waiting for the next part pleeeease update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
CatherinexxKC chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
The angst at the beginning of this chapter, I love it. Cant get enough.

And the ending of this chapter, always leaves me wanting more. I look forward to seeing the next chapter. Dying to see how Larsa handles things, and what Penelo is up too.
Really looking forward for more.
Ferrinas chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
Please for the love of everything holy update soon .lol xxxx
Glitter chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
It makes me wonder if Balthier is sending Larsa on a wild goose chase just for the fun of it.
Soldier1819 chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
Please, please, please, I am begging you to update this. This fic is better than anything I've read, and I am literally teetering on the edge of my seat. I need to know what happens next.
shinobinaraku chapter 4 . 9/4/2013
This is really cool! I'm a new reader, so I really don't know how this piece was, but I'm enjoying it!

Update soon!
twstdmind chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Thank you so much for continuing this fic! I am horribly excited to see where you're going with this! I wonder how long it will take for them to stop dancing around each other...
Ferrinas chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Ahhhhhh finally a new chapter _

I love this story sooo much :D , I wish Larsa would have answered her question about why did he sleep with her.

Cant wait for the next chappie , dont keep me waiting now :P xxxxx
impart chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
Hoping you update this soon with the next chapter, ive been following this story since 2009, I really love it and Im always wishing you will continue it, thanks for all your hard work, please keep writing!
Rose chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
Welcome back! It's so good to see you again! This chapter was full of heart ache, I honestly coulden't side with Penelo OR Larsa. I love how the 'problem' was somewhat revealed, and how Larsa really took it into consideration (worry?) and seemed to soften a little after that. The part bewtween Gabranth and Larsa was sad too, though I hope Basch has an idea of whats going on and why Larsa is acting the way that he is, maybe not. I don't know. The last part really raised my hopes though, even though Larsa is hardening his heart from Penelo you can see that he still really cares about her and maybe even still loves her very much. "His Penelo" after all, hehe. Hey, keep it up now! I never get to read LarsaxPenelo anymore... and your doing a very great job.
lady pomegranates chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
Curiouser and curiouser. I look forward to reading more. There are so many questions to be answered.
Angry Girl chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
Oh dear, this is something that Penelo would do though, how I wish she had just been upset and stayed inside! God knows what trouble she will find, what this incident alone could make things be seen or change.

Though it seems like they both have a different version of events of their night, this needs to be remedied even if it does mean they have to lash out at one another, or tie one another down to get the story straight.

Though I am damn curious as to what will be happening between these two, what happened? What is expected? And who is trying to cause them chaos! Hm.

Though Balthier must have been having fun breaking the news to Larsa in such a way, with Larsa so sure that Penelo would be where he knew her to be, I do feel sorry for her staff unless they underestimated her.

Look forward to more of this soon!
princessricestalker chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
Finally! Absolutely love this story. Hope you update soon!
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