Reviews for Weakness
Lord 0f Storms chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Ah, poor Trudy! Being declined three times over by the Riders! Maybe she'd have better luck propositioning a Weapon? Lol. XD

I can just imagine Laren's expression in this! Priceless.
xBBx chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Aquarius23 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
lol, that was really well done, you captured the characters perfectly!

I really enjoyed it, you did an amazing job.
PeaceRoseG'ladheon chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Aw! I love you! This is such a hilarious story, and completely original! What great idea! I was so amused by Trudy, I'm glad someone gave her a little more storyline!
Geno020 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
hahaha oh that one got a good laugh out of me. That's a good one there. Hope you keep writing.
thismercisforhire chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Brilliant! I loved it!

It would be totally awesome if you wrote a sequal peice with mapstone passing on that message, hopefully in an untintentionally(shit, I can't spell) humiliating manner :D

Anyway, totally hilarious. I love it! Love love love :)
Night 19 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
hehe, this has brightened up my day. Thanks :)
LdyDarkStr chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
*wicked laugh* Hehe. Wasn't that worth your very own Fastion? LOL. LOVE IT!
Lady Ardana chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Haha, that's hilarious!
RiderTwilightOban chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
...Interesting. The brothel scenes had been pretty interesting in HKT. Great job on Cap. Mapstone's 'disturbing feeling.' Hilarious is the thought of her and Trudy...
FondyCheesehead chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
LOL *giggle* *snort* LOL

Great job
WishfulThought chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Funny... in a odd sort of way, but still funny... Ya I like it.
brezzybrez chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
This little one-shot was great. I hope you work on your other story. Looking forward to the next chapter in that one.