|Reviews for Revelations: Orientation|
| CrayonsPink chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
This was great! I really liked it. :)
| BabyGlover chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
very nice, i do enjoy your stories you are a good writer
| dust-princess chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
And I can't outdo your other reviewers, so I won't try, but you should know that in my opinion you are the best at what you do.
| Choice chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I loved it! I was definitely pleased with this one.
I thought that the willow tree in Chad's mind, as well as all of the other lovely descriptive changes his mind's refuge takes whenever Chad's emotions turns, were lovely. It was like I could see all of those changes happening in my OWN head!
Even though there wasn't really any slash here unless you squinted, I still found myself loving every moment. I'm glad you didn't make them instant friends in this; you progressed to a lovely turnabout and finish at the end, where they're closer than before. It's believable, despite how quickly the changes take place.
Great job! I hope that you write more not-Chyan (or even Chyan... -nudge-) in the future! )
| Morkhan chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Ah, these are such a rarity! It's nice to see that someone, at least, acknowledges that not everything in life has to be romance. There are many forms of love, all of them incredibly strong in their own way, and friendship is one of them. I love a good friendship-fic!
| Rachel chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I have to say you are the only author who writes Chad and Ryan in a non-slash situation that is both belivable and really likeable. The two one-shots have become my favorite in the fandom. I re-read each agian tonight. And I really wanted to than you for writting a good ol' fashion story of the birth of a true friendship. A lot of writers 'round these parts get sucked into the complicated and dramatic. Your writting is efortless, and you give great voice to each charecter. But little is needed in the way of drama or disaster.
For my sake I hope you continue writting in this little universe you've created. Best of luck.
| mugglerock chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I absolutely adored both of these fics you wrote. I don't know, the characterizations and the development of their friendship just seemed so, for want of a better word, legitimate. I suppose canon, too. Your renditions of these characters were strangely perfect and intriguing. I really liked the religious aspect of Ryan.
Though, in all honesty, between the pair of the characters, I'd deem Chad the more likely to follow a more christian based religion, and not because Ryan is usually deemed "gay", but rather, I consider his fondness for yoga and things of the like to make him more likely follow an eastern religion (buddhism specifically).
Wow, I don't know where that came from. Anyway, I really enjoyed these, am really really looked forward to more by you, and I'm also really impressed with your story telling and your use of words. You are an excellent writer. Great work.
| e-p-unum chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I can't believe that no one has reviewed this story yet. It's excellent. You give amazing attention to detail and the story flows very smoothly. Admittedly I do like chyan fics, but mostly for the interaction between characters and not so much the romance. That makes this story perfect!
Very well done! Thank you for sharing it!