|Reviews for Final Stand|
| Afira chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
OMFG NO! WHY'D YA STOP IT THERE! UGH!
| avatardnarutard chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
I'm very impressed by the Sharingan technique you made! I'm not clever enough to pull something like that off. The fight scenes here were awesome! I feel so bad for Konahomaru right now :(
| Lupanari chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
;_; okay, first a moment of silence for the departed.
*sniff* all right, I'm good now. *deep breath*
Seriously, that was really sad. And there's only going to be more. *sob*
Kakashi's sharingan is really cool, though it's a little scary that it makes his eye bleed. And I'll check out that drawing. I want to see how it looks. And that chakra restoration thing was cool as well. Pity it can only be used once. I get the feeling he's going to need it soon.
And the seed for the Kakashi/Tobi fight is finally planted. :D Now that I'm looking forward to. The manga encounter was just pure disappointment. D: Hopefully, yours will be better :) (then again, it wouldn't be that hard to make a better fight than manga did *very irritated at Kishimoto, for various reasons*).
And the Kisame fight is up next. Oh boy...
| Hitsuka-Hatake chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
NIciful Job! Izumo and Kotetsu, sniffle, poor guys.
| Scanndalus chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
Wow, as usual, great job! I'm sorry that I forgot to review the last chapter. I'm a dunce. LOL. I really didn't expect Fuujin and Raijin to die, but I kinda figured that Kotetsu and Izumo would end up dying. You handled their deaths extremely well. Very fitting for the heroes they are. Poor Udon. I wasn't expecting him to die, but I respect the fact that you aren't sparing us from our favorite characters falling. I'm in the US Air Force and as all military members will tell you, war sucks. But you are giving them the heroes death that all who volunteer for service, and die in dervice, deserve to be granted. I can't wait for your next chapter. Outstanding job!
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
Mugen (pronounced 'moo-gehn') Limitless, endless.
In your defense, Makurayami sounds a lot cooler than Mugen Yami.
| Meira Evenstar chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
I definitely needed tissues for that one, but OMG what an amazing chapter! Update again very soon!
| sunshine143 chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
That was so sad that Kotetsu, Izumo and Udon died! I felt like crying! At least Tsunade was able to help Kakashi! I would have been completely devastated if he had died! Great chapter!
| Lily Yamamoto chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
Yay, lily's final chapter. Thanks for using her!
| Katestar98 chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
I am so glad you didnt kill kakashi. It would have been awful and i hope you avoid it for the duration of your story. Fantastic chapter and i look forward to seeing how they deal with Orochima and Nartuo's reactions as teh story unfolds.
| Pseud chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
Argh! You left me with a cliffhanger! Curses! Oh well, that just means I'll have to wait for the next one to come out. It's alright, I'll just wait and wait as it will completely drive me nuts for weeks as to what happens. But, hey! That's a sign of a good story! :D I really liked this one and didn't expect Kabuto to come out. Oh, and what happened to Orochimaru?
| avatardnarutard chapter 3 . 5/22/2008
The fanfic you're looking for is Shards of the Heart which I'm in love with at the moment XD
Awesome chapter! I was surprised that Kabuto showed up! Things are NOT looking good for Kakashi right now...
And yay for long chapters :) Thanks for writing!
avatard/narutard a.k.a. AvatardsUnite on deviantart. You wanted me to draw you a dolphin right?
| cardcaptor eternity chapter 3 . 5/21/2008
Very nice. I was excited that you finally updated! _ I do have a nice piece of advice for you. Instead of always saying "shikamaru's dad" or "my team's fathers" you could have them be referred to as 'the original Ino-Shika-Cho', or something like that, you know? -disappears into a dark mist- hahaha...
| anbu10 chapter 3 . 5/21/2008
wow...nice cliffhanger...can't wait to find out how Kabuto did it :)
| Prescripto13 chapter 3 . 5/21/2008
I'm rooting for Kakashi in this fight, lol! Kabuto just irks me-you did a great job of portraying his smugness.