|Reviews for Red Shirt and Apple pie|
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
| 11nivea342 chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
aw! LOVE IT
| xstarrynight61 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I love these Rory/Jess stories! Please continue!
| CherryWolf713 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
This series of stories is fantastic - I can't wait for more!
| Curley-Q chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Excellent! I loved the way you had Luke and Emily saying things in unison...very freaky! LOL Pllease continue oon
| pam halliwell chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Well you know my feelings about the first bit ;) but the lorelai/jess and luke/jess interaction still gets me right here *points at heart* :D
But ah to have a man be that sweet only because he loves his girl. I know they exist, they just never happen to come my way. But i still love reading about them especially if ‘they’re’ jess :D
Honestly i got the impression it was going to be more M but i’m actually more glad that it turned out this way, given the circumstances. Hope to see another in the ‘ridiculous’ series :)
| LVRofTristan chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I love this. Fantastic fic!
| boredliteratireader chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
that was so sweet! I'm picturing Jess in a red shirt...*drools*
well written...but a couple of mistakes..
/It took her two hours and three attempts to finally get out of bed and take a descent shower/
It's 'decent'..not 'descent'.
/“What about desert?” Jess asked./
it's dessert. not 'desert'..
| starletelena chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I loved it!
| MarlyCook chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Hela, Hela, Hela ..
You did not tell me about this one! I love it! So much! Ah, the kiss in the library was so hott I'm still blushing!
The red shirt is the ultimate turn on. Oh that was great. I love this one shot. Fanning myself as we speak.
Write more woman, hehe. I'll try to get online as much as I can tomorrow! Send whatever you want in email or offline message.
Anyways, back to my ranting and raving. You know I love Jess' cockiness! And the fact that he brought the Apple Pie .. made me so happy. ZACHARY! Oh! Did Sue put you up to that?
LoL, you know how she is about me and Zach! Nah, I'm joking. I llove it, Hela! *huggles*
| frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
really good! i like the part with "the red shirt" and speaking at the same time really finny. please continue! LOVED IT! haha
| iLoveTelevision chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
That was fantabulous! I loved the interaction each character had with each other-Rory and Jess, Jess and Luke, Lorelia and Jess, Richard and Jess and did i mention Rory and Jess- love these two! Write more! :D
| Asparagales chapter 1 . 2/15/2008