|Reviews for Job Dysfunction|
| hellohworld chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
That is a nicely written oneshot. It fits SO well into the character developments that the game left out.
Well done! *goes off to lurk around profile*
| Shadow R-B chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Aw, that was a really cute story! Maybe you could make a continume? Well, bye!
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
This story is cool. Their troubles are really amusing. I always knew that the first job level was weak, but I’d never have imagined it would be that hard. Through it’s logical when you think about it. As you asked, the king’s name is Argus, with a “u”, but as you said, it really doesn’t matter.
“Not looking convinced, the male tugged his mage’s hat back onto his head and hid under the rim.”
The substitution is slightly problematic, as although I know who you mean, the last other person you mentioned is Luneth. And “the male” isn’t really a good distinction between them… But that’s only a tiny, technical problem.