Reviews for The Onion Valentine
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
This story brought me to tears :'( well written 3 kudos to you!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Hahahahahaha... I thought it would end up be Angst.

Well, it still did aching my heart.


Idiot Yuuri... always slow. Let's hope it wasn't too late...
jasmine chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That is one adorable story. Did you base it around the onion poem or did you find it to fit in afterwards?
Sighcoe chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
cliff hangy, I want more. :)
Aria DC al Fine chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
It's a lovely story. I agree about the un-OOCness and I love that you retain KKM's happy atmosphere. The idea is truly unique. Yuuri, Yuuri, he could have made it a nation-wide search, sorta like Cinderella.

I understand from the poem why Wolfram's onion has that strong smell, but I don't understand why Yuuri's have the same smell (reasons associated to the plot aside, of course). The smell represents how one will love his/her true love. I don't think Yuuri will love Wolfram that same strong, teary way. May I have your thoughts on this...?

Also, Yuuri's asking the messenger to give his stabbed onion to Wolfram, right? Should the stabbed onion has a note to accompany it? Otherwise Wolfram might mistake the stabbed onion as the one he's given Yuuri and think that Yuuri's bringing him back to the castle to be humiliated...? The two onions are each other's double, right...?

Other than that, I'd love to see a sequel, too )

Great job.

melodyz07 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
The idea of the onion was very original and you wrote it so well

You should really write a sequel
saezutte chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This is really sweet! The onion thing is so typically cracked-out KKM plot too, I love it. I wish you had written them reuniting though.
fouloldron chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Oh, slightly sad but with potential resolution. More please? :)
Tenshi no Nanimo chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
You know what? This is probably the best KKM fic I've ever read. Short and simple, but it really made my heart ache! I hope that there would be another installation/ chapter!
anon azure chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
go onions...

shin makoku's februar tradition

and of course...


UnknownYmouS.cYcLoNe05 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Nice...I like have a very wide imagination...:D...
LostForWords07 chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Love this story! The onion idea was pure genius...
Sarahfreak chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
When I first read the title I was a bit confused but this fic was fun and interesting and I enjoyed it immensely. It was well written, flowed nicely and contained all the elements of a great story. I especially liked where you left it at the end, even if it would have been fun to have Wolfram clock Yuuri. Loved it!
Axel's Ashes chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Aw! How CUTE! -squee-
death by storm chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Onions... that was a bit random but very sweet XD.
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