Reviews for PROOF
AvrilLavigne25 chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
It was great, I got teary-eyed!
Mitsumi Haruka chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
omg! it's done! it's beautiful! it's so sad! why did she have to die? why? that's so sad that i think someone will cry so much but the truth is i have teary eyes already. it's so sad! :(( but it's good! beautiful. :D
krishaNe chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
i love this story... hope you make the sequel... but what happened to the battle? it's not yet over right
angelapretty chapter 2 . 5/19/2008
nice i reallu like your story...keep it's so sa..i can't help but cry...
DiamondStuddedRainbow chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
great, now i cant control my tears when mikan die.

please make a sequel. i cant accept it when mikan died

P.S-hope luna would be burned up in hell and die again in hell
LaDy CoUnteRpart of NaTsume chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
aww, that was good, it was so touching, especially the part where Mikan jumps into the electric ball and when she pushed Natsume out of the ball. yep, it's right, fate will do anything to lead you to its original plan.
purple-black-wings chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
hi there..


we should become friends in ff too, right?

your story is great..!

it's so tragic..

mikan died for natsume..


nice one..

i'll read your other stories later, okay?

please read my other stories too and review, okay?

wonsterrr chapter 2 . 4/13/2008
*sob*sob* it was so sweet! i lurve the ending too... though it was sad...

Heavenly-Being chapter 2 . 4/8/2008
vina03 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
do make a sequel!

i like it!

misspellings and wrong grammar are ok.. the story was good!

so sad! T_T
xXBlackTenshiXx chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
can you PLEASE do a sequel? I love this story
flame caster lover chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
hey i'm crying, what is going with me. I can't control my tears... Wah! I LOVE IT!
Irumi Kanzaki chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
that was so sad...
Hinamori Sohma18 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
Mikan died? T-T That's too bad. The way they talked in the end was a bit cliche no offense. But I see you got that from a movie (-.-) Luna is suc H, and Yuka just needs to go see a therapist.

O.O As I was typing I realized... the word "therapist," if you put a space after the 3rd letter it becomes, "the rapist."

Sorry, I had to tell you that. XD Lov ya story, you rock. If you want to reply to my review my username is Hinamori Sohma18.
Nitu82 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
next. chapter. soon. plz.
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