|Reviews for Foundations|
| Toukia chapter 1 . 4/3
I don't understand some part of this story. I mean, it's not clearly written or expressed? I don't know. Maybe its just me and my mind in chaos but I find it cute because of the ending. The part when rukia came up. :) I'm a sucker for ichiruki so there ya go. Ü
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
| ectobiiologist chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Aw, yay! I'm glad it ended happily. D Made me smile.
And I love this song. I was listening to it and on a whim thought 'Oh, now this would make a good fanfic!' So I came on here and just searched 'Foundations' and stumbled upon this one!
Kudos to a job well done.
| Kaarii chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Hey! Pretty good story, but I noticed a few things that are a bit odd. Other than the occasional grammatical error, you switched POV for Ichigo near the end of the story.
I bust out laughing when, in the letter, Rukia says, "Who wears a lady's shoes to get the mail?" I was thinking, "How'd Ichigo fit his feet in lady's shoes?" XD