Reviews for All the Small Things
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25
Im so happy to see that this story written by me and my friend so long ago is still getting reviews
Isesrez chapter 6 . 10/10/2020
Orochimaru makes me think of Michael Jackson.
cake0108 chapter 8 . 4/21/2020
Omg I love Obito sooooo much! Jajaja and the brothers all sound scary in a teddy bear kinda way!
cake0108 chapter 7 . 4/20/2020
Ugghh that Orochimaru is so disgusting. Omg but I love Sasu and Naru as parents!
cake0108 chapter 6 . 4/20/2020
Omg how precious are Naru and Sasus babies!
cake0108 chapter 5 . 4/19/2020
Omg Obito sounds soo friggen badass and cute at the same time lol
cake0108 chapter 4 . 4/19/2020
Omg this is beyond beautiful
Angelflowers27 chapter 14 . 2/18/2019
lots of applau
Karuyuki chapter 14 . 11/25/2018
Fantastic work. Love this Story.
Mirage chapter 14 . 11/11/2018
Interesting Story:)
Love Madara as yakuzza Boss...would so Love to see him find a Partner...Maybe as a crossover with Harry... Or viewfiner or yellow;)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/28/2018
I hate that Sasuke got pressured and guilt-tripped into adopting children. I hate that he immediately rolled over and did whatever Naruto wanted. Not everyone wants to be a parent. There are plenty of people who choose never to have children. Naruto had never talked to Sasuke about the possibility of having kids and then he suddenly sprung it on him that he wanted to adopt twins. WTF. Who does that?

And then, instead of taking Sasuke's feelings seriously about why he's hesitant to become a father, Itachi basically dismisses all of Sasuke's concerns. Immediately afterward, Sasuke goes running to Shizune to ask about taking the kids. All in the same night. Does anyone really think Sasuke got over his fears in only a couple of hours? Itachi's mediocre advice radically changed his perspective?

In the end when Sasuke went running to Shizune, it only looked like he was doing it to please Naruto and because Itachi had guilt-tripped him into it. There was nothing Saske said or did that makes me think he himself likes the idea of raising a child. You can't be so cavalier about adopting kids. If it doesn't work out, you can't just take them back to the store. I'm sure everything will be fine in the end since this is sappy fanfiction and there's no way to show true love in this type of fic without BABIES, but still. If this was real life, everything that's happened so far would be a recipe for disaster. Naruto started beating the shit out of Sasuke because he saw him carrying a box and thought it means he was leaving him. That's messed up and definitely NOT normal. These are the type of people who should be adopting?
solitare1 chapter 14 . 6/26/2018
And an excellent job it was.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/23/2017
amazing story.. perfect ending.
moodysavage chapter 14 . 7/4/2017
Love it still! So so awesome!
Ms. Zero Kiryu chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
I really enjoyed reading this, sasuke reminded me of Dr Cox's from Scrubs and I absolutely loved the proposal
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