Reviews for Anubis
Stacey's Universe chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
I'm liking this so far... But your punctuation sucks... You're missing speach marks and commas
Rameses chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Ever heard of punctuation?
CoryS chapter 36 . 3/5/2009
Great story great ending, but I wasn't too fond of jack taking carter's last name, even if it was just tacked to a hyphen. But that's just me. LOL
kayamira chapter 36 . 4/16/2008
loved your story! - great plot, very good ideas and you have written the whole thing thrilling all the time, without any boring parts! good job!

but mabe, as someone said before, you could get your storys beta-ed, wich would make it much simplier to read it, especially for people like me whose mother language isn't english

I'd love to read more from you!
SapereAude03 chapter 36 . 4/15/2008
Oh, Wow! That was just amazing! The ending was great, the ceremony was beautiful (I loved it when Daniel sneezed LOL!), I don't know what else to say. This is going on my favs. list for sure! Thanks for the great read! Jess
chr-nyhala chapter 36 . 4/10/2008
congratulations! i loved this story so much! great job!
dp chapter 36 . 4/9/2008
Very nice story. Sweat ending. Looking forward to your next story.
Daggar Blynth chapter 36 . 4/9/2008
Loved it!

Will there be a sequel?

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Guest chapter 36 . 4/9/2008
the ending was good. hope there's an epiloge
Daggar Blynth chapter 35 . 4/7/2008
Yes!

Sorry I haven't been reviewing, ive been reading it though!I ve been busy and i couldnt waste time reviewing... Not that i didnt want to!

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HAZMOT chapter 34 . 4/6/2008
That's too funny that Teal'c the warrior of the brave Jaffa is afraid of some little bugs, that Daniel obviously is responsible for implanting into Teal'c's subconscious. I'm sure Sam and the rest could just strangle Daniel for forgetting how seriously Teal'c takes their little innuendoes. :D
dp chapter 34 . 4/6/2008
Cute. Have been enjoying reading your story.
SapereAude03 chapter 34 . 4/5/2008
Ahaha! Bed bugs! Teal'c's so crazy! What's going to happen next? ;) Jess
HAZMOT chapter 33 . 4/3/2008
I'd say that our little family is back together again, and Sam receiving the Medal of Honor was the coupe de gra. I love the fact that Teal'c hates bugs. Big bad Jaffa. heheheh. I'm sure that Sam has won out with Anubis, but it seems to easy that he's gone, or not. Love that Jake repeats Jack in his cursing. hehehe that was so cute. :D
bekinerd chapter 33 . 4/3/2008
Just thought I should let you know 1st degree burns are the lightest and least painfull, going up to 6th degee which are the worst and just leave charred bone.

It's good, I like it.
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