|Reviews for Naruto: Acolyte of Jashin|
| Starting a New Life chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Well, you have my attention.
Hidan is such an interesting character, with his strange attitude and his wacky religion. Him raising Naruto should be very interesting.
Your portrayl of Hidan seems to be pretty good so far. The swearing, worshiping, and compelelty crazy attitude and personality (one moment about to kill naruto, next offering the kid a chance to go with him, just cause he felt a tug at his mind) seemt to be accurate.
Overall, story seems to be pretty well written, as when I scanned it I didn't really see any grammer or spelling mistakes, but I suck at that anyway, since I myself use a beta for my fics.
Only real complaint I have (and it is very minor and is only being put here because I feel that peoples reviews shouldn't always be praise and such) is the idea that Naruto could tell a Jounin apart from a Chunin, because of their attire...how is thier attire different? For example, the only real difference on how Iruka (chunin) and Kakashi (jounin) dress is Kakashi's mask. It seems that the standered Konoha shinobi clothes are the same for Chunin and Jounin. Unless they add a personal flair to it (Anko's coat, Kuriena's complelty differnt uniform), there is no way to tell them apart. But as I said, this is a very minor compliant, and doesnt really take away from the story.
Right, I am very curious on how Naruto is going to turn out. Will he have the crazy personality similiar to Hidan, or will he be a bit different?
Well, I look foreword to seeing more.
Till next time
| heir of okami chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
something original... i like it! cant wait to see who gets sacrificed to jashin next. update soon and keep up the great work. later
| duelmaster chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Good story, a Naruto raised by Hidan sounds very intresting, plus NarutoxTayuya is my favorite paring hope to read more soon
| avatarofdiscord chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
| Blasto Fantasto chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I think you have a great first chapter here. I've only seen one other story similar to yours and it was poorly written, so its great to see some one do a good one. Hope to see more soon.
| xxxwolf999xxx chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
very cool i like hidan. its cool that your going to have naruto go with him i think this will be really good.
| morogoth chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
good stuff I want to see where you go with it
| Lawless-one chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
cool this isgoing to be good update soon.