|Reviews for Chemical Substance|
| skyte06 chapter 8 . 5/17
THis is really deep, I love all the hidden meanings, and the subtle use of peoptry
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
die slowly and painfully you worthless son of a whore just because your a kunt doesnt mean we have to deal with your psycopathic views of life, moron... die and die quick you waste of life
| jbadillodavila chapter 12 . 2/28
Me gusta tu historia
| FFSlogic chapter 9 . 2/26
I can't do it - how the fuck is Itachi supposed to be sympathetic and Mikoto awful... If it's Itachi's fucking fault in the first place? He is the one who found them, he is the one who snitched on them, and it's from the snitching that Faguku got the grand idea to torture Mikoto...
Like for fucks sake...
Still this was interesting if more than a bit melodramatic in nature. I just can't move pass the disconnect of I-fucking-tachi being the instigator of all this and still being painted as some sort of fucking hero. Like no.
| entelejent chapter 12 . 12/6/2014
Hah... I don't think I've encountered anything like that before. It's an actual successful application of angst. The real ninja-ness, particularly Itachi's, is awesome. I don't know how he ended up killing almost every other Uchiha in those circumstances though.
| Night beautity chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
I can so fascinated with this story. Love the bond that Naruto and Itachi share. Please don't kill him off Itachi. He and Naruto are one of my favorite things about this story besides their character growth. Yes to more characters being introduced.
Sorry to ask but is this fic abandoned? Because it is really one of a kind. I haven't seen a fic deal in/with the sensitive subjects as you have handled them. Please don't abandon this fic.
| OoOXylionOoO chapter 7 . 6/18/2014
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/17/2014
I hope you start to write again soon. It is a good story though sometimes a bit hard to figure out what is happening. Really want to know what happens next :)
| ExplosiveSex chapter 12 . 2/8/2014
6 years and 40k words... Yeah, no thanks. Author must be either the laziest writer alive or wounded up in the hospital or just succumbed to death. I think it's the first one personally. It wouldn't be that bad if the story was actually decent in the first place. Amount of metaphors in this story is so much it confused me to no end. Vague as hell, refused to tell us events as it happened, instead resorting to labeling them and comparing them with the use of metaphors in the most annoying way possible. Itachi got the Mangekyo Sharingan? THEN SAY SO DAMNIT.
| ExplosiveSex chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
You should really stop writing the story in such a vague fashion. I mean by the time you reveal the person doing the action it's already halfway through the chapter already. Such as the Sandaime doing his work, just say his god damn name. This is prevalent throughout the story too.
| Googlemo chapter 12 . 2/8/2014
So yeah... story is good, maybe too emotional for my taste but where are MIKOTO?! You just forgot about her or what?!
| Googlemo chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
Lol, you just forgot about Mikoto?! WTF WITH TEA?! This chapter made me hate tea for 2 days!
| Googlemo chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
The story is deep but FUCK Naruto is so freaking pathetic... its just disgusting to read about...
| Googlemo chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
fuck that was unexpected!
| Googlemo chapter 3 . 2/7/2014
I don't mund shotacon... but this is a bit of overkill... your 9yo naruto is just that, 9 years old kid, who is oblivious OF EVERYTHING.
I wasn't oblivious like that even at 7yo. but well... this is Naruto...