Reviews for How It Should Have Ended
Sora-Temple chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
seriously... no...
THE BONDSWORD chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Dude...a little...too dark and evil...seriously.
Miyukitty chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Heh heh heh, very cute... ; It does seem like they might be a little angry with him, although he had a point about escapism...
CO Raven chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
How true. The only thing I have to say is that Cid should have been there too.
Kayne Lee chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
That was totally awesome! I think this is very relevant, as Marche had nothing to lose going back to the real world, where he was pretty, friendly, had parents, could walk, didn't have some freakish hair colour disorder, and had a positive future...Whereas Ritz most likely had to die her hair every other week for the rest of her life, Doned had to live his life in a wheelchair and a disease which meant he would probably die in a few years, and Mewt who's mother died at a young age and his dad was a failure! I'd be pretty annoyed too! Thanx for writing this...You should think about making a sequel...maybe even something involving the remaining three of the group attempting to get back to Ivalice...just a thought. if u don't write it i will, k?
Kuzlalala chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
pretty funny, though the hero was finally dead.