|Reviews for The Temple Pond|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/18
| Loner Kid chapter 1 . 1/11
i wish they find out who naruto is at the end...
| tyog56 chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Awesomely hilarious story!
Please update soon ...
| Cute Kirby chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
For most of this I didn't know whether to be amused or horrified, and then Minato said that 'it' wouldn't be stopping by the ramen stand, and I lost it. Just went off into gales of laughter. That's a bet even Tsunade can win against.
| animeromance72 chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Weird...but,in a good way.
| Catzi chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
This was interesting, but you should clarify something. In the end of the chapter, you mention that Kakashi died in the Alternate universe. But, in that same universe before the battle between Naruto and Minato started, you have a dialogue with Kakashi speaking.
Normally, I'd just assume that Kakashi died sometime between the end of battle and when Minato talks to the third Hokage, but you didn't indicate any sort of time break at all, and you indicated that Kakashi was dead for years:
" Good. I need a break." said Obito, blinking his eyes. Even though he was wearing his goggles, his eyes fel like there was something in them. He hated that feeling, which is why he wore the orange eyewear, but it seemed to not be helping anymore.
" It would be better to carry on without one." said Kakashi, his voice cold.
" Kakashi, regular people need breaks." sighed Rin.
" I agree." said Minato, chiming in. " When we…"
And then, end of chapter:
It had been years since Kakashi had died on the Stone Village war
You might want to edit this.
| X59 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
| KyuukiTheAnimeFreak chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
YOU KILLED KAKASHI! D8
But I will forgive you because of Minato saying that Obito got groped. XD
| Selonianth chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
| Foresthunter chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
LOL that was awesome! misunderstanding win!
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
LOL great ending :P
| Judah chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Very in character, and also amusing. Good job.
| EmeraldGlee chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Wow...such a funny story. recodan...have you ever thought of making this a multi-chapter story? That would be really cool...
| malko050987 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
And Naruto makes things better, even when he has no idea what he's doing :D
| T.D. Sugoi chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Wow... this was awesome... I feel so sad, though, for some reason... Oh, right, it's prob that sad song playing on internet radio o.o
- TD Sugoi