|Reviews for A Bond of Father and Child|
| Gavin chapter 16 . 9/12
I loved it, that is to say the least. I hope to start reader The Next Carriers of the Will of Fire soon. I just want to say that this is the first Fan-fic i have ever read and most likely the best one I will ever read. I am excited to get onto the next part to see even more of this story and yeah, I'm a little mad you left us there. Whenever you leave cliffhangers I think of that strange and confusing ending from Animal Farm. I love you as the best Fanfiction author ever. I hope that you continue to make more amazing stories like this.
*you are now my favorite author next to Michael Crichton who is an amazing author, anyways, bye 3
| Cac chapter 1 . 7/21
So sweet I was bouncing in my seat! Your writing is wonderful!
| Original Weirdo chapter 1 . 7/1
Or you could name him Boruto and Himawari, just a thought
| NH'f chapter 14 . 3/28
Some seemed to be OOC.
Not bad :)
| NH'f chapter 15 . 3/27
okay with me :)
| Yoro chapter 16 . 3/2
Ai... where's authorrr.. hiks..
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/17/2014
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| JSemillano chapter 16 . 11/30/2014
Love ur story . . Ur good .:)
| Hey chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/26/2014
Yo is it finished. Just 16 pages
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/16/2014
It was good I liked it I read the whole thing I enjoyed some parts and loved some others even so I can only give it 3stars because even tho its a fan fiction it didn't really fallow the original story the kubbii doesn't talk that much, and it sending its charka through him to his kids is unrealistic even for the kubbii even though with all that I still liked it
| why not chapter 8 . 4/20/2014
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| anime freak 0108 chapter 16 . 3/22/2014
THAT WAS LITERALLY AMAZING OMG I LOVED IT