|Reviews for My Boss and I|
| lilkathra chapter 11 . 5/4/2011
love to know how it ends
| Ree-Vance chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
| Ree-Vance chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
ahhh... no AIDS.
| Ree-Vance chapter 5 . 1/18/2011
OMG OMG OMG
SHE HAD AIDS
| Ree-Vance chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
XD i can guess what they did in the shower... 0/0 XD
| Ree-Vance chapter 3 . 1/18/2011
Why is it underlined? D: It's weird looking TTTT
| Ree-Vance chapter 2 . 1/18/2011
Darn. Syaoran misses. XD
| Ree-Vance chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
LOL "Work or vacation?" XD I'd be like. "Neither, bed. 15 more minutes."
| Higurashy Kagome chapter 11 . 1/9/2010
first - you neeb a beta reader so bad - to many grammer mistackes
second - the title doesn;t fit at all! not to mention that the chapthers are smaller that any fanfiction I have read and believe me I read a lot. You should describe a lot more and make dialogues but shoudn't explain every move they say as if your telling us what's happening - you should make it in the contest like for example ("I love you" he said as he put his arms around her waist and kissed her lips with pasion, bitting her lower lip and caresing her hair while she responded to the kiss with the same pasion and love she recieved from her soulmate, soon-to-be husband, in holly matrimony) - understand? you don't have to be that "poeticaly" you can be less in words but I hope you get the iddea of what I meant.
3rd - I understand you are only 13 but be serios! I mean c'mon I think I had learned of the "sex stuff" for like since I was 13 years old. Even thou you son't really know what's going on or what it does mean you should have enaught mind to know that they can't have made love (sex)or like you said - "make out" - wich actually means just to kiss and touch - 4 years ago - I mean people do it like 4 times a week this meaning that in a year they do it for like 240 times!
I don't want to be rude I'm just doing an cunstructive annalysis of your story. I hope you'll understand my notes as just a way to imporove it and not as a remark.
In the end it is a good strory - light and sweet if this were your first story then I would say greaight work, but there still is room to improve and become better.
Please send me a message as to what do you think of my review .
Thank you and I wish you inspiration for more and more stories.
| xXSakuraBlossomsXx chapter 11 . 11/25/2008
CUTE! although I really don't understand why this fic is called "My Boss and I" if all this fiction is about the trip, finding out about the babies, having the babies, etc... and it doesn't talk about work or anything. anyway it is still a nice story.
| redmermaidprincess chapter 11 . 8/29/2008
sweet fic. update soon.
| AanimeLover chapter 11 . 7/29/2008
ahh,so your from the me I Love your story especially this one(My Boss and I),sorry to mention the title dosent match the ,but its okay,I like it ,would you be kind enough to make more stories,I just love ,Thank you,I'll be waiting,GodBless...
| anigal08 chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
what do u mean by the start of this story is
on the next chapter?
| Sakura9183 chapter 11 . 7/20/2008
I'm so glad that you finally updated this. I've been waiting forever! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon and fast.
| zelrilnise chapter 10 . 4/28/2008
miz ko na kau!
btw its cute story except from their love scenes
aba ang loka nakakagawa ng ganon?