|Reviews for Every Breath You Take|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/16
I am here because of your story named heart's desire. This story is also so amazing. Look like you are maths student by your choice of words.
| CorbynPool chapter 20 . 12/14/2016
Wow, this is a great story. I loved the plot, and Heather made for a great "villain". *wink wink* Fantastic writing you two, and props to your beta. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/21/2016
its kinda like heather is becky from supernatural hahhaha
| Flyingwiththeflock425 chapter 9 . 12/5/2013
Oh my god
| why can't i just delete chapter 20 . 9/9/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed that. It was well thought out and executed and your characterizations were spot on. Heather was very three dimensional and an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic villain. Well done!
| FauxTroll chapter 18 . 6/29/2013
YES! Finally a villain that realizes how badly they've messed up! Thank you so much :D
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/13/2013
KYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! THIS IS BRILLIANT! and yes, that deserved caps-lock...
| Alex L. Kerr chapter 20 . 9/22/2012
This was a fantastic collaboration! Great job!
Navigating to the sequel in 3, 2, 1...
| Alex L. Kerr chapter 17 . 9/22/2012
I'm loving this story as I go through it, but Missouri *was* being a bitch in this chapter. There's no excuse for her insensitive behavior: you don't set out coffee and demand patience from a family going through what John and Dean are - and you certainly don't give Dean attitude about his completely justified anxiety. The longer she drivels about John's grey hairs - or takes offense to Dean's inner monologue - the longer Sam is still held captive. Time is/was of the essence, yet Missouri needed to get, 'comfortable,' before she laid the situation out for them? I don't think so.
I would have strangled her.
P.S. I still love this story, though. Feel good that I'm so worked up about Missouri's behavior. ;)
| lanternheart chapter 20 . 1/1/2012
Damn, I was hoping Dean would say something about the Sacral Chakra xD
*claps* Story well done.
| lanternheart chapter 19 . 1/1/2012
Ahahahaha, Sammy nearly screwed a psychic vampire-succubus xD
| lanternheart chapter 18 . 1/1/2012
Wow, finally Heather had a breakthrough *facepalm*
| lanternheart chapter 17 . 1/1/2012
Oh my god, I LOVE THAT SONG :D It's beautiful *tear*
Yeah, rip Heather a new- Err, nevermind.
| lanternheart chapter 16 . 1/1/2012
Hating Heather... Grrr.
Ahahahaha, she nearly knocked somebody down xD
| lanternheart chapter 14 . 1/1/2012
I really hate Heather. I should probably not say more... I don't wanna lose my account for illegal swearing o.o