Reviews for Every Breath You Take
Sairah chapter 13 . 3/13/2008
Oh, Sam, Sam, Sam...what has she made you do? Glad Deam realises Sam didn't go willingly! Can't wait for them to catch up with Loony Tunes Heather...it really creeps me out when she calls Sam "her sweet sam". Lets hope she gets whats coming to her.

Look forward to more.
carocali chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Oh no, Sam! He's completely (almost) fallen under her spell. I love that you add the tears to let us know that he's still struggling - but how much of Sammy is still in there?

The BEST news is that Dean knows this is completely and totally a lie. The BAD news is that they probably won't be able to find him.

Great update! MOre please!
criminally charmed chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
oh, that bee-atch so needs to die. Dean is gonna seriously put a hurt on her.
SamDeanLover28 chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
what she's doin to Sam is soo wrong! but im really loving it so far and yeah im readin the chapter again
SensiblyTainted chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
You update really quickly. I'm very impressed. This is very well thought out... I hope Heather gets her A** KICKED eventually though and I hope it doesn't hurt Sam too much to be rescued. Hopefully even though he'll be in a type of withdraw, he'll also feel violated and will help fight to get away from her! She's CRAZY thinking she can just MAKE him like her when he is totally out of it! God, she REALLY gets under my skin.
Still Awesome2009 chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
OKay it's official, I hate the bitch now, I don't even care she kidnapped him and took him from his family, just that I didn't thin of it first. JK LOL. Great chapter
callitintheair chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Hey there,

Great chapter as usual!

I can't believe she just took him!

I can't wait for friday.

Awesome job.
BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Wow so Heather is getting her wicked way, for now at least. Looking forward to finding out what happens next. This story continues to be a very exciting (and addictive) read.
i chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Is Missouri going to be in this?
skag trendy chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Ah this is great. Really looking forward to the next part of this story.

Great job.

Kind regards,

ST.x.
vonnie836 chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
This is really heartbreaking how Sam is leaving his family for Heather although he is all torn up inside over it. Poor boy, it really makes me mad. I do have the feeling Heather is not totally evil, she is just a victim of her heritage but still, that is not an excuse to use Sam like she does. I can't wait to get another fix of your story before the long spring break. Hugs, Vonnie
ROBINV chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
Oh, God, Dean and John now know Heather has stolen Sam, and they had better get hunting to find him! I just hope Heather is wrong, and they DO somehow figure out she's taken him to Lawrence! Before it's too late! Love, Robin
Trish62 chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
So you're going to leave and I'm guessing Dean and John won't have had time to kick some a**. Evil. Another good chapter, looking forward to Friday!
sUnKiSsT chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
can't wait for more!
ames 449 chapter 13 . 3/12/2008
I'm sorry for the lack of reviewage. The last few weeks have been a little crazy and I've only had time to sit down this morning and catch up on some reading. Lucky for me you updated as well! Which was cool.

I'm really enjoying this story. Heather is EVIL! I love the way you have built the trust between her and the older Winchesters. Like thats not going to come back and bite them all on the ass! Anywho, I think you're doing a really good job with this. And Dean's retribution is going to be SCARY! Cant wait to see some protective older brother in action :D
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