Reviews for Every Breath You Take
friendly chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
great job.. this is an awesome story
skag trendy chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
Oh the devious little bi*tch. Dean's fallen under her influence and now Sam's alone with her and vulnerable.

Bad news!

Great chapter.

Kind regards,

ST.x.
xXxKelly82xXx chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
I love how neither John nor Dean have copped to Heather's plan yet... Let's see how Sam will react when he wakes up...! : )
ames 449 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
I started reading this the other day and didnt have time to review so promised myself I would come back to it when I did and I'm glad I did. Really good start. Intriguing chapters. I love how Heather is picking Sam apart via his psychic powers. Looking forward to an update.
PsychicWonderKitty chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Uh-oh! Sam's gonna be alone with Heather, NOT good! Well, not good for our Sammy, GREAT for the story! LOL. Man, I'm really liking this Heather chick as a villain, a psychic-succubus is a frightening foe if I've ever heard of one! But the most frightening thing about Heather is how she's manipulating them all, especially John, and now Dean apparently, into thinking she's just the friendly widow next door. Controlling John with sympathy points, controlling Dean with touch, and having Sam all to herself to do whatever she wants with him, yikes.

It seems that Sam knows something is up with her, but then she can put him under and weaken him with just a touch, and it's gonna be a battle for him to expose her misdeeds, especially with John and Dean under the impression that it's just Sam's old injury talking! Her attraction to Sam is shudder-worthy in its twistedness and obsession - how she sees him as 'hers' b/c his abilities set him apart from his family in her mind; how she sees his youth, innocence, and inner/outer beauty as 'delectable'; how wanting and excited she is to be able to use Sam for her own pleasure regardless of consequences to him and his family...and again, all that deceit, making clear she doesn't have or plan on having any regrets about it all. Very creepy and awesomely evil!

Definitely enjoying so far, Gidgetgal, I've enjoyed yours and Sendintheclowns individually-written stories on here very much, so I knew a collaboration between the two of you was definitely gonna be a winner! And another great writer as the beta with Floralia, wow, triple threat! LOL. Majorly looking forward to the next update, gals! :-)
sammygirl1963 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Dang, I didn't think DFean would fall for Heather's charms so easily-that just made it so much easier for her to get close to Sammy! So not good!

Oh if only Dean or John could get home sooner than she thinks and catch her "feeding" on Sammy-Heather would pay dearly!

Can't wait for your next chapter!
vonnie836 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Heather is so sneaky, amazing how she got Dean's suspicions quieted. Poor Sammy, looks like he doesn't have a chance. This is sure a wonderful story. You two work really well together. I can't wait for more. Hugs, Vonnie
Still Awesome2009 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
great chapter
ROBINV chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Whoa, this story is GREAT! This woman is a formidable enemy, to all three Winchester men, and I can't wait to see where you're taking us. I also love the erotic overtones of this tale! Love, Robin
xXxKelly82xXx chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
wow, just came across this, it's great... More Sam n Heather. I find her interesting...! : )
jenilee chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Great chapter.

Nice little backstory on Heather. I could almost feel sorry for her if I didn't know she was after Sam.

"She now realized that with Dean, physical touch would be the best way for her to keep him in line and unsuspecting"- He may not do chick flicks but Dean is definitely the touchy one. Hee, even it's just to smack you in the back of the head!

*Thanks so much for answering my question.
BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
Great chapter, busting to know what happens next - well I'm pretty sure Heather will enjoy a taste of Sammy but can't wait to read all about it. Keep up the fab work you two, Liz x
SamDeanLover28 chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
*longer chapters please*another brilliant chqapter by the way *i think its time i start readin previous chapters over and over soon...like this 1. i cant say enough of how much i enjoy yall's writing.*winks* see ya next chapter Shante oh and enjoy JIB tonight
friendly chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
great chapter.. can't wait for the next one..
BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
Oh just caught up with this story and really enjoyed the first 2 chapters - right up my street. Good work, loving it. Liz x
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