Reviews for Definition
CathyD chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aw... Shawn this was great! Once again you deliver with the good stuff. Even though you wrote it for Melissa, thanks so much for sharing it with us too!

angelrei06 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
that was cute! like it!
Dannie Tomlinson chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aww! So sweet!
nikkitan89 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
aw. haha. that was so cute. thanks for writing it.
grits chapter 1 . 2/17/2008

that was cute
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aw, so cute. Catch ya on the flip side.
rapunzl chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Absolutely adorable. Totally cheered up my evening.

I don't usually ask, but there isn't any chance of a Chapter 2, is there? Possibly a Tommy-turning-the-tables and requesting "definition" of their relationship post-Murianthis (or post-breakup)? I don't anticipate it'll turn out the same way, but I still think it'd be a cute way to resolve that conflict. 0:)
Alwaysright1 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aw, that was too sweet. Hope your sis is feeling better.
White-Knight-1988 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aww that was kinda cute. The only thing I noticed was that you referred to Kim as Tommy's "Crane" which, considering this took place right after White Light, hadn't happened yet. No big deal though, just thought I'd point that out to you.


rose19586 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
OMG! It was so cute! I loved it!

Its going to my Favorite Stories List!
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