Reviews for Mary Lived and John Died
SillyJily chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This was a very different story plot and I was pleasantly surprised. I don't think it really would have worked all that well as a longer story, but works perfectly in this short one.
simys chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Not bad but I don't think Marry Winchester would ever put up with being pushed into ANYTHING she didn't want to do
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I liked it, but I think you can tweak it a little and make it better. It really is an amazing idea for a story. Good idea! Write on!
tellie chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Shame the fic is as short as it is ;(

Ok, ok, it works fine, but I still would like to read more. I bet there is enough material for multi-chapter story... I just *love* cop POVs
DevilsGateGuard chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Wow I was so sure Dean was either going to turn up dead or be sent away. Killing his stepfather worked nice. If Dean would have told his Grandfather to go away how would his life of turned out?
ClaireBennetakaLizard chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Dean just can't be happy. It was dark. I liked it.
Dugleik chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
poor dean...
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
That's a new twist. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
AmyElll chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
:O Sammy beating Dean up

Poor Deano

This was good, but i was well shocked when you said Sammy joined in with the beatings

Well written

xx
beth9874 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
oh please continue it, pretty please, i really wanna know what happens next
VacantAccount chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
This was brilliant!

So sad and everything but I could just imagine it happening if it HAD been John that died.

Well done.