|Reviews for Crimson Rain: The Rise of Sigma Red!|
| JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Wow, this is different. I like how Dru escaped and of course he had to come after Sky.
Love the Sky/Z thing.
I wonder what'll happen next?
| Delgado chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Hey, good idea! I'm surprised that no-one's done this before. Great start, i'll be looking forward to more!
| PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Hey buddy, this is a good start but are you sure it's a completed story because the status at the top said it was complete. Anyways I hope there's more cause I want to see what happens next.
| Wolflmg chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Not bad. Looks like you have an interesting story going on here, but I do have a few suggestions to help you out. One, when scene change from different location, I would make a note of it, by placing a break, your able to add those right in the document manger of this helps make things less confusing for readers. Also to keep the story going, try to see if you can make the chapter longer, I normally try to shoot for 6-12 pages per chapter. Anyways I can see a great story developing here, keep up the good work.