|Reviews for A Moment In Time|
| greasergirljohnnycake chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
This was so sad. That's what happens when Randle gets to crazy!
| spicygurl chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
The tone of the story is outstanding and totally beliveable! Good job!
I think you misspelled 'RANDLE'. You spelled it Randall, it's Randle. But whatever, spelling doesn't make the story suck.
Gosh, this is too DAMn goo! I commend your writing preformance!
| Bobbie3926 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
That was sad. I liked it. Thanks for the sad and great story.
| ayeesshache chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
This is very good. You really should make it into a longer story. I love it. Its sad though.
| smartbookworm chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
You Should Write more. Maybe about the Boys Correctional Facility. Maybe after that. I don't know I think you should write more.
| ms. nick jonas chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Do you like Steve?
| Minty Says chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I really liked this.
| arieswriting chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Would that mistake be spelling his own name wrong?
Randle, not Randall. You also spelled Mathews wrong.
An interesting idea for a one-shot, but it might have been bettered served as a longer fic. It goes by too fast for any real emotional involvement. I enjoyed the fact you used drag racing and there was consequences to it. I would suggest you try and work this into a slightly longer piece - 2 or 3 chapters might better serve the idea.