Reviews for A Moment In Time
greasergirljohnnycake chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
This was so sad. That's what happens when Randle gets to crazy!
spicygurl chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
The tone of the story is outstanding and totally beliveable! Good job!

I think you misspelled 'RANDLE'. You spelled it Randall, it's Randle. But whatever, spelling doesn't make the story suck.

Gosh, this is too DAMn goo! I commend your writing preformance!
Bobbie3926 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
That was sad. I liked it. Thanks for the sad and great story.
ayeesshache chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
This is very good. You really should make it into a longer story. I love it. Its sad though.
smartbookworm chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
You Should Write more. Maybe about the Boys Correctional Facility. Maybe after that. I don't know I think you should write more.

B
ms. nick jonas chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Do you like Steve?
Minty Says chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I really liked this.

Minty
arieswriting chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Would that mistake be spelling his own name wrong?

Randle, not Randall. You also spelled Mathews wrong.

An interesting idea for a one-shot, but it might have been bettered served as a longer fic. It goes by too fast for any real emotional involvement. I enjoyed the fact you used drag racing and there was consequences to it. I would suggest you try and work this into a slightly longer piece - 2 or 3 chapters might better serve the idea.