|Reviews for Wired|
| i luv ewansmile chapter 5 . 5/31/2008
Yay! You posted a new chapter! Ahah. You are definately one of the best writers I've come across. You've got an awesome handle of descriptions and your imaginary is pefect. Especially, the part where the lights had the halo effect like while driving in the rain with the headlights shining through. Awesome, awesome stuff. And how your write the characters, keeping them so in character.
Ahah. Loved the part where House freaks because Wilson left his side for a few minutes, poor guy. Seems Wilson is the only one who can make him better, make all his 'boo-boos' go away. I really like the House/Wilson friendship, I'd like this story to stay that way but I'm open to more. Ahah.
Splendid udpate! Thanks very much. Can't wait for more!
| inu-youkai 911 chapter 4 . 5/30/2008
This is a great story, are you still updating? 3 I hope so because I'd like to see how this ends up.
| i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Just dropping by to see if you're posted the next chapter yet. Hope you've had a great week! )
| i luv ewansmile chapter 4 . 5/23/2008
Wow. What a fantastic story you have here. I've been playing catch up and I've enjoyed reading your story so far. You capture House and Wilson's characters so well.
Awesome story. Please update soon!
| theviewfromhere chapter 4 . 4/11/2008
I apologize for the belated review, first and foremost: Two weeks in Hawaii tends to hinder a person's review cycle a bit. :P
Secondly: I was catching up on all the chapters I had missed while I was away, all of them (more or less) written by different writers. Running the risk of discounting some truly wonderful writers, you have the best talent I've ever even HEARD of. The purity of your writing and the fun details you add, along with the bang-on characterization, impeccable grammatical skills and voice taht your writing seems infused with, all lend to the allusion that I'm reading a hardcover novel that someone simply typed out on the internet. Believe me, you truly have a handle on the English language.
| Noutchka chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
I love it ! What is next ?
| cbeth88 chapter 4 . 4/5/2008
Really enjoying this story. Very well-written. Hope you can update soon!
| momsboys chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Oh man poor House. This chapter makes me hurt for House. Hurry with the next update I can't wait to read more.
| 420PeaceFrogs chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Gah! That last paragraph set my teeth on edge...wow...well please update soon! :)
| bahahumbug chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Again, great chapter. I love all of the detail that you put into this...and can't wait for the next update!
| Lady Lex chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Amazing! This story just gets better every time I read it! And I love your descriptions... in fact, I envy them! I'm not so good at descriptions.. well, not as good as you, anyway! I didn't find it hard to follow at all. The way you described House's pain.. it was like I could feel it, too!
"Just then, an ugly maroon and blue paisley tie flopped in front of his face, giving him a lovely close-up view of Wilson’s bad taste in apparel."
LOL! That is such a great line. Wilson is just so darn cute with his tacky ties! ;)
| Wynjara chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
So, it was true, he thought hazily, Wilson really was Jiminy Cricket.
Best line ever :)
As the pain receded from a five-alarm fire to a two-story blaze
Fabulous imagery. Stop apologizing at the beginning of chapters! I'm enthralled.
| ESP chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Goos start, not boring (yet), but aside from an 'opening' conflict, I don't see where this is going, plot-wise. Please avoid turning it into another bland hurt/comfort fic.
| anon chapter 3 . 3/23/2008
so far so good! please update soon!
| Haley chapter 3 . 3/21/2008
This is such a great story. It is just like an actual episode. I love your detail and etc, and at no time do you sound like a cookbook!