Very good

Just one thing that rea, REALLY bothers me in not just this story but others of yours is tha casual violence of the female characters against the males. Slapping shoulders, backhanding stomachs. Your women have a serious case of loose hands. And that’s wrong. I’m guessing you’re female so you don’t see it that way but turn things around: for instance in this chapter Percy’s girlfriend slaps him. Apparently you’re under the illusion this is some sort of comic relief, and acceptable.

Now imagine Percy slapping his girlfriend. Harry backhanding Ginny for some comment. Ron slapping Hermione. Wait, but it’s a male doing it to a women, that’s abuse! No women should accept that!

Indeed, and that’s my point. It’s annoying, rude and uncivilised. And it’s absolutely NOT DONE.

Respect I’d earned, not handed over. Not even to parents. Ron doesn’t owe anyone an apology. If anyone needs to apologise it’s Molly for screaming like a banshee and chasing (another) child away.

too beautyfull! and awesoem! the final are so sad but beatyfulL!

This was a sad, but fitting end. I am crying right now!
Thank you for a wonderful story. This should be made canon, especially the last chapter. Keep writing

The part with Luna and Harry... It was uncomfortable, I found it cringy. I never even thought even in my dreams that Luna would actually have feelings for him. I hope you won't develope much on that later.
Also, Luna is straightforward, but this seemed a bit... Too much. I don't mean to offend, I am just saying what I felt.
Also, thank you for a wonderful story so far, I am enjoying it immensely

Wow,very heart touching ,ty

Good story. It's definitely one of the more unique post-DH stories I've seen. Thanks for writing it.

Ron and Hermione date for like two months before getting married? This has to be one of the strangest post-DH fics I've seen.

good spr

Story's good, what one would expect from a nice G/H post DH canon.

Sadly the whole "we're adults but our overbearing parents dare to make demands about our private life, and we listen to them" is on my list of things that I can stand, right next to the "we're waiting to get married" religious BS I've seen in too many fanfiction. I let that slide at the first mention but it has been brought up twice or thrice since and now I'm really afraid this story is going after the combo, and will mention that every other chapter until the end of her 7th year at least. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't feel like taking the risk anymore.

I'm thinking JK Rowlings wrote the last chapter because I could really see that happening with Harry or Ginny when one dies the other would follow. The last chapter made me cry it was the first time I ever cried reading a story you have a great talent don't waist it if you don't want to write books or stories professionally write poems write songs please don't waist this talent use it.

I just can't get around how Ron is talking sounds nothing like him, he would never say half the stuff in the books as he does in this story but hey I'm just the reader you're the author so it's your world, wish there was more completed harry and Ginny stories out there I only read them and harry is alone stories because Ginny is Harry's rock she is the ONLY PERSON that can understand him besides him she's the only one to live being possessed by Voldemort, she is the only person to make him do something like think before he acts she is the love of his life . If you read philosopher's stone you can tell it was love at first sight the only reason he didn't know it was the way he was raised he didn't know anything about love until he met the Wesley's

Omg, this last chapter had me bawling.