|Reviews for Lawliet and Chocolates|
| Guest chapter 34 . 9/6
| Ls girl chapter 34 . 8/15
Please finish brilliant looking forward to when they go back to death note world that will shock em
| epicwonders chapter 34 . 7/29
You could be an author one day.i really like your writing and can't wait for you to update.
| sneakykitty chapter 34 . 7/28
I reaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyy love your writing and I think instead of just writing fanfics you could seriously write your own books one day
| LL chapter 16 . 6/19
This is amazing x
| A reviwer chapter 34 . 6/16
UPDATE PLEASE. THIS STORY IS AMAZING!
| MickeyLOLgirl chapter 3 . 2/23
Aww, advice from Wammy - San!
| Gatoz chapter 31 . 1/5
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE PLS. ITS GONNA KILL ME IF YOU DONT FINISH THIS STORY.
| Guest chapter 34 . 12/6/2015
Plz update already! D:
| Alexia Colette chapter 34 . 8/3/2015
Death Note Tard? I love your story. You've managed to keep Lawliet In character which some people find hard to do. But was it a good Idea to show him the videos? It might change the plot a lot...I hope you're ready to handle that. The romance is set, I think it's time you came back to Death Note's storyline. Just a suggestion..I'm excited for your next chapter and can't help but wonder how this story will end.. will they tell her parents who L really is and where he's from? And how will they sort out seeing each other if they decide to take things to the next level (marriage) will L come and live with his beloved or will she go with him...If I was her I would go with him and abandon this hell we call life.
| Amy.m chapter 21 . 7/29/2015
Ok so it's 5am here in the UK, I have been up all night reading this story. It's incredible! You're very talented and I'd actually love it if you wrote more of these fanfictions. I'm very new to reading fanfictions, but hell who knew I could get more hooked to a story someone posted online than a book that has been published. I've loved every single chapter so far. Heck I adore L so reading parts of this has given me butterflies and I get all excited as if I'm in the protagonists shoes. Spectacular writing, brilliant story. Can't wait to read the rest! Not looking forward to work in 2 hours but this is a good reason to stay up. Keep up the brilliant work! (I'm 19, female from the UK. Just in case you wanted to know what kind of audience you have)
| ASDFGHJKL chapter 34 . 7/26/2015
I caNNOT EVEN I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH PLEASE HELP ME IM FANGIRLING TOO HARD I CANT BREATHE GAAHHH
Also the "deathnotetard" things are freaking me out WHAT IS GOING ON
PLEASE TELL ME L DOESNT HAVE TO GO BACK
MY HEART WILL BREAK
WHAT IS "zero zero zero zero" IM SCARED ;A;
| maw chapter 34 . 6/10/2015
i just read 34 chapters in two hours i don't even know how that's possible
i bow before you, you amazing human.
| lawlietlovesweets chapter 34 . 5/10/2015
Author-sama! I know this is 2015 and the fact that I just discovered this fic is sad :(( Please update the story. I love it so much. My feels are indescribable as I have come to say that I love your story very much. Too much. That it hurts.
Is this the end of the story? I know you haven't update it for seven years *O* But I hope you would sometimes. #prettyplease
I miss Lawliet and Sasume 333 Please make more death note/LXOC fanfics.
| LawlietIsLife chapter 34 . 5/1/2015
OMGGGGGGGG UPDATEEEE PLEASEE IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! DO THEY MAKE IT? I SWEAR TO GOD IF THEY DONT IM GONNA DIE WITH SO MANY REGRETS!,(not really but you get my point) AND OMG I WANT TO KNOW WATS GOING TO HAPPEN WHEN L GOES BACK TO THE DEATH NOTE WORLD? WILL SASUME GO WITH HIM? WHAT ABOUT THE CANDY..WHAT IF THEY RUN OUT OF CANDY AND CANT MEET EACH OTHER?
OMG I CAN SEE IT ALREADY!... THERE DOWN TO THE LAST CANDY, LAST MONTH, THE ONLY THING KEEPING THEM APART, TIME. *FAST FORWARDS 3 YEARS LATER OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT* L/SASUMES WALKING AROUND LIKE A ZOMBIE.. EVERYTHING ISNT THE SAME ANYMORE WITHOUT LAWLIET/SASUME. EVERYTHINGS JUST... DEAD.
UGHHHHHH SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS! PLEASE PLEASE PLASE CONTINUE THISS!