|Reviews for Black Widow|
| AMC88 chapter 11 . 10/5/2010
Great story, just re-read it, can do it over and over again. Are you planning a sequel, this story is screaming for one!
| Kiluca1228 chapter 11 . 2/19/2010
This is a great story.! :) i love it
| Ghostwriter chapter 11 . 9/19/2008
Uh, uh-oh. (Hums the Twilight Zone theme). This won't be good. Catch ya on the flip side.
| novashanti chapter 7 . 9/7/2008
Little bit of Betaing for you: his-self himself and there's an instance where you wrote headache and it should be head ache.
| Tacpebs chapter 11 . 9/7/2008
Poor Sam and Dean. Poor John and Bobby as well. O.o Sally's diner? o.O Ah! They just happen to be going too. . The craziness!
| TraSan chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
Funny enough, as I was reading through the chapter I thought, "Wow, it'd be cool if she had Sally come back after Sam as an adult."
Then, Presto! 20 years later.
It's like you pre-read my mind.
| rozzy07 chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
Ah what tangled web you've weaved here, tight in the telling and so one hell of a read. You start this chapter with a desperate Jim reviving a very limp WeeSam, to a contrite John realising after a rebuke from both his sons that any future step mom needed serious vetting, to a future portent that the evil lil bit*ch Sally is still around to are still very sensitive grown up Sammy.
So as you drag this to present day, it leaves a hint towards a sequel. I hope so as I've so enjoyed the journey you taken me on so far; despite my sorry status as bad reviewer. Rozzy.
| rozzy07 chapter 10 . 9/6/2008
You just left me wanting to scoop up little Sammy and run to safe ground and hug him tight. Got a feeling thats how all those around him feel, though like Pastor Jim they just keep having the crap beat out of them. At least the puppy's safe - Yes? (Despite the cliffie of a newly recovered screaming Pastor Jim for our youngest Winchester...) Dean will go crazy if he isn't thats for sure.
| rozzy07 chapter 9 . 9/6/2008
Oh lordy girl you near broke my heart here. Young Dean is close to breaking, having shouldered a huge burden in keeping his little brother safe against the odds. Whilst our wee Sammy is clearly going into shock or worse, Sally injuring him ways yet to be understood? As for your Jim Murphy I just want to hug him, his compassion for both boys leading me close to tears. Great story telling.
| rozzy07 chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
Sorry for my late review status as this story deserves so much more from me. I loved how Dean rallied his little brother to him, even as poor John succumbed once again to the evil Sally's enthrallment. Lets just hope Pastor Jim has something up his sleeve to save the boys and their dad before things well and truly go pear shaped!
| sammygirl1963 chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
Fantastic wending Shelly, especially to leave it on suh a cliff hanger-does that mean we can look forward to a sequel? It gives me the shivers just thinking about the boys coming into contact with Sally again, especially Sammy! Jeez, I wonder how Sammy managed to elude the hunters all those years!
| RedDragen chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
I can't wait for more. Man now Sally is going to get Sam again and that is not good. Dean is going to have to call Bobby and he will some how get John if he is alive and they will come running. I can't wait Please up date soon.
| 1Pagan3 chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
Looks like our boys went from the frying pan into the fire... I really hope this means you have a sequel brewing in that wonderfully devious mind of yours.
Take care of yourself first though... the sequel can wait! :)
| ziggy.uk chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
That chapter was great, loved how you had Sally feed and disappear and then cut to 20 years later! Sammy is certainly getting a bad feeling, but can't pinpoint it, and the name Sally hasn't rung a bell with them! What a pity they haven't rung Bobby before stopping at the diner, he would have remembered for sure!
And what's the betting that Sally recognises Sam and his 'power' and tries to entice him as she did his father? The story now says 'complete' but is there a sequel in the works?
| tomash chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
There's a sequel right? You can't end it there! Great story. K.