|Reviews for Pilgrim|
| SodiumLamp0nAHill chapter 1 . 8/19
Well written AND well thought out! The perfect blend of fact & fiction! Not to mention you have a good grasp of older English.
You even gave considerable thought to the trials Carlisle would have had to endure on a months-long ship journey. At first, I read the name "Dogood" an thought it sounded familiar, but then when you said it that James Franklin was the printshop owner with his brother Ben, I was all "Wow, it's Ben Franklin!"
A "vegetarian" vampire and a true revolutionist: what a meeting! I do hope you write more along the same vein. Well done! :)
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
L.O.L! I forgot Ben Franklin was 'Silence Dogood'! Saw this on an episode of 'Liberty's Kids' and though it was hilarious! :-D
| USNeshama chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Loved it! Such a cute one-shot that is completely believable in line with the Twilight series. Thanks for writing!
| kiwihipp chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Indeed his wit was too sharp!
| k1942 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I love American history, and it was fun to think about Carlisle meeting the great Ben Franklin, when he was yet a boy!
| Thing in the fridge chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Love it! :)
Did this marvellous episode carry you on to further ideas?
| pitstop96 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
holy slag... i see what you did there :] lol i completely did not see it coming though. awesome story:)
| Josie Shane chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
That was great. Thank you for sharing
| Lonelygoatherd chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Wonderful story and extremely well written, something you don't see much of nowadays. I enjoyed it:)(:
| Edward's Doll chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
great job! hahah i found the end somewhat ironic :-D i loved it!
| USApotterfan chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I love Benjamin Franklin! What a great idea.
And I love picturing Carlisle in colonial clothing...hehe.
| Lillz chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
another brilliant story! that's three of yours i've read so far, and i've enjoyed all of them. i'm adding you to favourites :)
Benjamin Franklin. excellent...
| Gone Gone Very Gone chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
| WishingOnMyStar chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I loved reading this. I thought you got the period speech down and also Carlisle's temperment. I absolutely loved this and i'm positng it on my Carlisle c2. Great writing!
| cool-gal95 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Ok that was really good. Benjamin Franklin? Awesome...